Black Poetry : I never wanted to write this

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jan 2, 2009.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I never wanted to write this
    I am sorry sometimes
    I care for you
    I wish that YOU cared for me too

    You smiled
    We kissed
    Your heart wasn’t true

    If it was
    Then right now
    I would be with you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Man oh man do i ever feel this here couldn't have said it any better
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling ya poet

    :injured:

    :sick:
     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flo on Poet! Flo on!
    Diggn the pure truth here poet...
     
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    knowing when to walk away...

    ...is an instinct lost on too many of us, today. simplicity is a beautiful thing
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...simple...honest...vulnerable...i know those feelings by heart. glad u wrote it.

    LOVE&RESPECT,
    DP2G
     
  7. mizjoice

    mizjoice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    straight and to the point.....very good flow, Hodee.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Hodee...

    There are traces of familiarity between your lines that pull at me.

    I felt this!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You said that exactly right poet, and no we never want to write anything like this, but sadly sometimes this is exactly the way that it is. Well put.