Black Poetry : i never knew

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  1. yahsistah

    yahsistah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i never knew.....
    how much i loved u
    and then ur were gone
    and i was alone
    i never knew
    that i would miss u
    i thought oh i would
    be strong
    i never knew
    the depths of my soul
    longing and yearning
    to have u near
    i never knew
    wondering why
    someone didnt say see
    i told u so
    i never knew
    the pain is like
    one i have never
    felt before in life
    i never knew
    tears of mine
    have never fallt
    harder than now
    i never knew
    cying my eyes
    out over never
    again feeling u
    i never knew
    the thought of
    never touching u
    hurts me so bad
    i never knew
    until u was gone
    until u was gone
    until u was gone
    i never knew.....
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Does anyone ever knows the hands of fate? :sand: ...and it's something we can't get around.
    wonderful poem...and very glad to hear something from you. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we never can uncover what is held ahead
    well pose'd flow i love'd it
     
  4. yahsistah

    yahsistah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love

    thanks for the love yall this came off the top of my head
    Shalom Yahsistah
     
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    most welcome awesome coming off da top
    u pose a great gift
     
  6. caramelpython

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    Yah... Tight drop gotta do more sis.. :heart:
     
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    This was madd tyte. Nice drop. I was definitely feelin' this peiece.
    KOOOOLLLL-AAAAAIIIIIIDDDD!!!!!!!!! :wink:
     
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    tight drop...flow some mo
    where ya at QQ....
    ..........peace
    Angel
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Yahsista

    Beautifully written...

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    You know what they say about not missing your water until your well runs dry? So true, and there is much truth in your heartfelt scribe.
     
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