Quiet Poetry Lounge : I Never Knew Anger

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  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I never knew you to be one
    to provoke certain emotons in my soul
    I never knew you to be one so bold
    There was a time when all you brought me was happiness
    Now we can't function in the same room
    We can't even sing songs in the same tune
    Everything we had is now lost
    I blame our pride for wanting to be the boss
    What happened to the part of us that waanted to bee real
    I shead tears now longing to feel
    He touch that changed me
    The voice that promised me everafter
    The fool whose appetite sought laughter
    In my heart of hearts I ponder after you day after day
    My concentration is focused on you every time I pray
    To an innocent bystander it would seem that you are gone
    A lost that became the muse for my sorrow's song
    This is simply the explaination for why
    The old folks say love is patient
    Yes it would seem that you have gone so very far away
    But the truth is I look at you every day
    Your heart is here but it is gone
    And...................
    I never knew anger not because you were so good
    I never knew anger not because you always understood
    I never knew anger because I still long for you day and night
    I know love and you are all I have here tonight
    So when I am asked when it was over was I angry with you
    I say no because with him anger was something I never knew :grouphug:







    Love lost is a Life Lesson learned :fyi:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am honored to be the first one to respond to this work of art. It is blazing hot!!! Ya'll better get on this and send it to where the great ones are. Do it... now!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very deep on point drop this speaks in many ways to touch one !
    great drop
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am Humbled

    I am humbled to know thatmy freestyle poetry is so heavily appreciated.
    My only hope is that I am able to grow in my craft.Thank you $$RICH$$ and onepoet for the love and support.
    :hearthis: :hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely the creativity of ya mind and craft will rise
    as i witness it here today ....flow on RISE higher
    ya most welcome from within heart ...................
     
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    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can, uh.. lil' ol' me say sum???

    this is really brilliant poet, amazing stuff!!!! can i be on your fan club?!!!!!!

    :baby: :baby: :baby: :insane: :insane:
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You from the bottom of my heart :luvv:
    If your desire is to be apart of my fan club then your wish is my command. :blowkiss:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Anger sometimes fits in the overall package, and just as we work out our love, so is it with anger...and continue to love and grow.
    nice piece poet, I enjoyed it
     
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    africaschild New Member MEMBER

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    flowing from the soul, good poem keep it up
     
  10. tichaona

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    very very beautiful...
     
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