Quiet Poetry Lounge : I Never Knew Anger (Pt.2)

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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I never knew anger
    Even when you locked me away in a dark but
    warm place where the only light I saw was
    When you came in to extend
    your embrace
    I never knew the full extent of this dark place
    You used to keep me hostage
    I only knew that you were there and you
    Still are
    You came in daily to check on my heart's condition
    To render me a slave to something that
    I was too afraid to open my eyes and see
    But Oh when I finally opened my soft brown eyes
    I began to realize
    That you held me captive in your love
    The very thing I was afraid of
    I had feared you being near me
    Knowing me both inside and out
    I feared having a teacher to show me
    What love was all about
    Now I see what was always destined for me
    Being held by the strongholds of love in you
    Therefore even in my captivity
    I Never Knew Anger
    :love: :hearts1: :kiss1:

    To that special one again I say you have been more than
    one soul could imagine a soulmate being and I say....
    I Love You will never be enough so I'll write til the day I die
    to try to emulate the Almighty's love for us and my love for you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    how i'm feeling this .......
    nice write ya pen have much to say continue
     
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    yes. yes. nice. still keepin it smooth. please continue. peace
     
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    Thank you very much rich and the same to you daroc. i appreciate your view on my continuation of my talks abouit the anger I never knew because of love.Daroc I must confess that Music and Poetry aremy freedom.
     
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    inside that note is comfort
    the mind relax as the hand work
    leaving a musical dance of radiant shine
    love in heart is the key to happiness
    u pose this well ......most welcome ......
     
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    I have to say you have such a beautiful soul and it continues to be that way daily.
     
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    re: Anger

    Yes, anger has no place where Love is. Excellent.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yet again you manage to get exactly what I aim to say with my poetry. thank you for appreciating my work.
     
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