Black Poetry : I Neva Been(2 Da Fellas)

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I neva been touched,
    Da way dat u touch me,
    I neva been kissed,
    Da way dat u kiss me,
    I neva been told,
    Da sweet things that u tell me,
    I neva been luved,
    Da way u make luv 2 me baby,
    I neva seen someone,
    So cute and fine as u,
    Who will look up 2 me,
    And whisper things so tru,
    I neva felt so good,
    Like this before,
    Neva in my lifetime,
    The fun has just begun,
    I neva been this happy,
    And kisses wit a smile,
    U're smile is beautiful,
    I neva been dis kind(lol)
    I'm fallin in luv wit u,
    My heart so falls 4 u,
    Makin sweet luv 2 u,
    Is all i wanna do,
    I neva been wit someone like u,
    Who's so adventurous,
    Da way dat u kiss me,
    Is all but delicious,
    Da way dat u taste,
    Da way dat u flow,
    Da way dat u walk,
    Da way u can blow,
    I neva seen a man,
    Who could talk me down,
    In every which way,
    Our luv is profound,
    Neva in my lifetime,
    I have been told,
    Da greater da $riches$,
    Da better it goes,
    I neva been kissed,
    Da way u kiss,
    Da way u caress,
    My body with da sweetest scent,
    I neva been luved,
    Da way u luv me,
    Da feelings are tru,
    Dat i have 4 ya baby.




    Aaliyahmonet:heart:
     
  2. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!
    lucky guy....cuz that was too much for a brotha!!

    nice read ma....
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reads like lyrics...i can hear the beat in my head! nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was a beautiful song that makes me say ummmm!!

    did i do dat !???

    much luv @ ya sweetie
     
  5. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks ya'll. Ya'll very sweet:)

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya Aaliyahmonet..
    Isn't that a wonderful feeling.

    Misty
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Misty

    Thankyou misty:)

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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