Black Poetry : I need......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sista_Gurl, Jan 26, 2003.

  1. Sista_Gurl

    Sista_Gurl Active Member MEMBER

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    I need for the love in me that is lost to come home beacuse
    I feel kinda cold.
    Ima little tired of being all alone.
    I want to forget the one that broke my heart but he keeps reapearin at all the wrong times.
    I need peace of mind.
    Tired of putttin my all and getting nonthing but pain.
    wounds heal and time tells everthing but time aint tellin me nothing.
    I aint askin the imposible but I need love for me.

    Sista gurl
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista Gurl, as a woman in search of clarity be sure of one thing. You deserve the best! Thanks for sharing. 1poetsought
     
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    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Tired of putttin my all and getting nonthing but pain."

    man i know exactly how you feel...great piece

    one luv
     
  4. Sista_Gurl

    Sista_Gurl Active Member MEMBER

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    thank you thats how i been felling for a while thank god for poetry without it i would be a whole diferent person it makes me feel peace from problems . thanks for the love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one so tired
    be not of dismay
    secret love vow in pray
    one so loveth thee is within
    let no man undo such heart
    so many play da game
    leave ya heart alone in pain
    rise up dear one forth true love
    is to be ........give self a open mind
    only in due tyme .....flow on poetry is da key to da light !
     
  6. Sista_Gurl

    Sista_Gurl Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks i hope i find something like that in my life time. or come close to it.
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i dont know if it is

    but this seems like a really honest piece

    very emotional

    nice job
     
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    Sista_Gurl Active Member MEMBER

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    thank you when i write it comes from the heart
     
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    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i need love...

    alright sista gurl! i'm feelin' that...
     
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    Oh how we have all felt this pain. Be still an he shall come, when you look for it he will never come, Be humble you will know him when he arrives
     
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