Quiet Poetry Lounge : I Need Your Brown Sugar

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Jan 25, 2006.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lonely Nights
    (pause)
    Its so
    Its so long ago
    (pause)
    I see
    (pause)
    Mourning Lights
    (pause)
    Dripped in waterfalls
    (pause)
    See my love
    (pause)
    Just dont ever ever
    Leave my side
    (pause)
    Cause your my everything
    From jupiter to my heart siiiiiiiings
    (pause)
    Your my love
    (pause)
    Who im dreaming of
    (pause)
    Are you diggin me
    (pause)
    I'll scream your naaaaame
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    Its a crowded room
    (pause)
    no where
    no where
    for me too go
    Yet
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    Me & You
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    Ebony & Ivory
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    Juju's in the summertime
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    Brown suga I need you nooooooowwwww
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    Chorus
    I love you
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    I need you
    (pause)
    I feel you
    (pause)
    I hear you
    (pause)
    Done let me down

    I said

    I love you
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    I need you
    (pause)
    I feel you
    (pause)
    I hear you
    (pause)
    Done let me down

    "I Need Your Brown Sugar"
    I need you
    (pause)
    I need you
    (pause)
    I need
    (pause)
    you

    Turn the lighs down low
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    I got the cure
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    The love you see
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    Its the man in me
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    The haters hate
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    The hustlers play
    But
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    Sweety-Sweety
    Im here to say
    That
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    The sky is blue
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    The grass is green
    Yes
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    I will give you everything
    cause

    Chorus
    I love you
    (pause)
    I need you
    (pause)
    I feel you
    (pause)
    I hear you
    (pause)
    Done let me down

    I said

    I love you
    (pause)
    I need you
    (pause)
    I feel you
    (pause)
    I hear you
    (pause)
    Done let me down

    "I Need Your Brown Sugar"
    I need you
    (pause)
    I need you
    (pause)
    I need
    (pause)
    you


    Sincerly,
    Tantrum "Last Of My Kind"
     
  2. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lonely nights
    dreams of me touching your hand
    tears from you splash upon my thigh
    telling me you need me
    still a man
    even in your most sensitive light
    I will never leave you
    nice drop poet :kiss1:
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You

    Stars so bright
    It dont seem right
    That my lady aint here with me
    But
    I see past the rain
    Too the wonderous night
    And she is here with me
    I know
    This is now
    And now has came
    The love is the moment
    That my hearts
    Skips two beats
    bae bae
    Now
    Its
    Tears in my eyes
    Lonely nights
    Please gurl dont walk away
    Oh my god
    yes God oh mymymy
    On my
    Still I need you here
    If you were to leave
    Dont know what I'd do
    Yet still your here with me
    "A" I Love You
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing like having that
    sweet brown sugar coated
    beauty beside surely she
    won't leave your honey hide

    This was awesome Tantrum
    ladies did y'all here the man
    brown sugar !

    Love is in da airrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, love is in the air, and I'll bet this sounds great read aloud. Keep those flows coming.
     
  6. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    again the tant has found his love niche flow on tant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:kiss1:
     
  7. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You for the Love
    Brother $$RICH$$
    Sister Nevar & Watz
    I appreciate you all
     
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