Black Poetry : i need you black sister

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by pdouble27, Oct 1, 2003.

  1. pdouble27

    pdouble27 New Member MEMBER

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    Excuse me black sista, can I talk to you for a minute
    Can I tell you what I want
    I want you. I need you
    I need you to need me
    I need you so we go around my boys, then i can front like im big time
    I need you to feed my ego
    Tell me I look good and out of every dude you been with, Im the best
    Is that alright?
    Matter Fact there's more
    I need you to help me get over these complexes and conditions that I
    have acquired over time
    They slowly but surely destroying my mind
    One got me doubting my position and purpose in society
    Another got me wondering can I get pass the stereotypes and mysgynistic views that me and the male species laced yall with
    I call it the Ike Turner disease
    Can you help me cherish you for the spiritual, brilliant attractive womann you are.
    Am I asking for to much?
    By the way, what's your name?
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    do you really need us like that...or are you just saying that? this was beautiful but is it true? much love.
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    i need you to need me just like that :)

    Welcome and Thank You For Sharing :wave:

    our Brother Ike aint no different than the rest of us ...

    we all need ta ... "get over these complexes and conditions"

    Beautiful Poetry Brother

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome :wave:

    i feel you my brother...
    this was tight
    i hear you...
    but once you
    get all that
    can you be true..
    not turn
    not hate...
    unconditional yeah thats
    what it is about...
    love from the heart...
    not fake but true....
    on my side as i am on yours...
    can you deal with the ups
    and downs or will you run????
    no harm just thought i
    would ask....
    :wave:
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome :wave:pdouble27

    Black Bruther
    I need you
    there is no other
    i would have as my lover

    Yes I will be by your side
    I your Queen,
    You My King

    Together we can glide
    into a spiritual high
    that will join us as one

    Respect me, as I respect you
    together...we will rule

    living in growing
    under the the sun
    as one.

    Nice vibes ....

    Peace
     
  6. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was tyte...
    and i hear you too...
    it's nice when someone has your back
    completely...word
    i hope you find dat sista...
    keep scribe'n....

    btw... welcome to the land of poetic delight
    feel free to drop your insight
    day or night
    aiight...

    peace
    khasm
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can you help me cherish you for the spiritual, brilliant attractive womann you are.


    Hey, I feel you on this...definitely
    and what a phenomenal introduction
    Beautiful Scribe......& Welcome!
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
    welcome :)

    this was a GREAT intro...let it flow :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    wow welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome within the family of bond
    dis was very smooth and sweet scribe let ya ink run
    welcome ! :) :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  10. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My name is Jazz....

    loved to the flow...and welcome
    much respect j.
     
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