Black Poetry : I Need You As A Friend

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where should I begin

    Before my awful end

    With whom these

    Days are spent

    I need you

    As a friend

    To love you

    To that end

    Surrender

    Make amends

    IMMERSED

    In all your lore

    Beloved at your core

    Bewildered by a smile

    Entranced by a lie

    Needy all the while

    Our bodies undefiled

    I need you as a friend

    Past gone relations

    And...

    Give no more to sin

    Selfishly

    Again ~


    Darryl Abdu Omari :wave:
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ copyright 2010
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This was so on point and to da core .......keep speaking and i'll keep listening !
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, friend.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    True dat bruh !!!!
    U just keep bringing the message soon everyone will catch an ear......
     
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