Black Poetry : I Need To Write

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by klabarron, Dec 16, 2002.

  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need to write.
    I need to write.
    I need to write.
    I need to write.

    I need to write about daffodils and springtime thrills
    About paisley prints and green rolling hills.
    About a cool breeze on a hot summer's day.
    About how high I am.... in a natural way.

    I need to write.
    I need to write.
    About a faithful friend
    About stickin’ with me through thick and thin
    About the true depth of relationship
    About commitment between two where one won’t dip
    I need to write.

    I need to write.
    I need to write.
    I need to write.
    About days of hard work strugglin’.
    Negated by nights of good girl lovin’
    About this beautiful black diva I’m livin’ with.
    About how she rocks my world and make my wig flip.

    I need to write.
    I need to write.
    About pens and pads, and pads and pens.
    About how tight scribes with words new worlds begin.
    About stimulating your intellectual mind.
    About simulating the back of your neck from behind.
    About how you begin to shake and quiver.
    About how I bring ecstasy - strong pen-strokes I deliver
    About how your eyes roll back in your head.
    About how those sweet legs spread cause this scribe is hot.
    How you wiggle your tongue and think of that special spot.
    How chest starts to flutter and your thoughts are shot.
    Now you’re feelin’ the this scribe’s mental misogynistic plot.

    To mentally stimulate you..

    Thoughts infiltrate you…

    Vibes titillate you…

    Scribes saturate you…

    Verses so inflate you…

    ‘Till we intimately find connectivity
    And I gyrate mentally
    And you pulsate intellectually
    And we achieve a higher conscience
    Just because I wrote it like that!
    I need to write.
     
  2. smallworld

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    That was a hot flow and it moved thru many levels of emotion. I dig it, keep it up :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flow on dis was awesome ........moving on da path
     
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    YO TAKING IT TO THE NEXT PHASE. THAT WAS STRAIGHT TO THE POINT.KEEP THOSE FLAMES BURNING.SHAKA ZULU.PEACE.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    klabarron

    That was tight and off da hook.

    The flow is on point and on full tilt.

    Keep it coming. :toast:
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes
    Don't we all...
    Liked the concept..
     
  7. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need to write about daffodils and springtime thrills
    About paisley prints and green rolling hills.
    About a cool breeze on a hot summer's day.
    About how high I am.... in a natural way.

    wish i could write bout stuff like this

    ill concept

    and **** i done felt that way so many times

    including today

    nice drop
     
  8. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    don't know how I missed this, but NICE WRITE
     
  9. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    isn't it amazing

    how we never know what's going to appear on the page! nice peice!
     
  10. FeLoNy

    FeLoNy Member MEMBER

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    I need to reply
    I need to reply

    ya flow was nice...700
     
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