Black Poetry : i need to clear my head

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Derrick Jay, Apr 22, 2002.

  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    casting cataclysmic concoctions
    spewing jism of juicey blackberry lips
    touch taunt steaming flesh
    relish holding soft spun fingertips
    missonary zeal riding railsong
    gong chimes thong kiss goodbye
    over distant rumbles rubs friction
    lost whispered underneath midnight skies
    cries tears dropped near landing swans
    flight thrusts caught up in nowhere
    thought turns not tending to go on
    vibrational rotations carry with no care
    wanton abandon saddened by time
    moonrays roll differently along the present
    last shiver tells the tale of lust denial
    roll away from folds of enveloping desire connected
    against love eternally infected
    in this way sprayed on clear canvas
    evolving into a different creation
    and with that said
    check my driving spirit
    realizing i need to clear my head...
     
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    missonary zeal riding railsong
    gong chimes thong kiss goodbye
    over distant rumbles rubs friction
    lost whispered underneath midnight skies


    Wow Derrick. You want to clear your head words and rhymes that most of us WISH we had! You suffer from nothing worse than an excess of inspiration. Just wish I could catch what you've got! You're a poet to the bone.
    Peace and blessings.
     
  3. Derrick Jay

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    ...sometimes it builds up and i need to just empty whats running through my mind...i am humbled by your acknowledgement, thank you...

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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    Ooooweeee!!

    This here is some Nice Flo!!
    I dig Much Bruh!!
     
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    Doing what needs to be done!

    When you write and inspire and give knowledge to
    others that is a gift, when you inspire and gain knowledge of
    self it is a "blessing".
    Blessings on ya House!
    And Peace and Prosperity!
     
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    I do love your flow-etry, brotha Derrick Jay. Just keep telling the truth that's within you...keep telling it!

    alyce
     
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