Black Poetry : I NEED THEE...(This is a poem LovelyG wrote, this is SKINDEEP posting it for her)

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    help me please!
    take me from this misery...

    i need to be...please
    in the arms that cherish me

    help me PLEASE
    give me strength to be set free

    release your hold on me
    help me lift my hands to thee

    Lord God, help me
    Bring your arms to rescue me

    your protection is all i need
    from the harsh thought of reality

    i need to escape and be
    true and pure to thee oh help me

    i need thee oh i need thee
    your my last hope to be set free

    take me...
    take me...

    i'm ready

    take me...


    take me..
    release me...

    i'm ready...

    i need thee...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was a very emotional heart felt scribe from our sistah
    as she fight the battle of illiness and pain
    praying unto the master for he's knows all and hear all

    peace be unto thy soul
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, this is a heartwrenching scribe, God can make a way out of no way.
     
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    mmm

    thats all i can say
    that right there makes me think
     
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    This is a very deep write as I sit here holding back my tears after reading of this courageous and beautiful sista. All I can say is my heart goes out to her husband and family.
     
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    Lovely .. we love you

    This a very heart felt. Lovely you are in my thoughts and prayers. Between heaven and this place. Which will it be at any hour. These are words from a lovely lady, expressed in a deeper time in her life, wishing for no more sorrow, and pain. Decisions we don't make. May you be at peace in your heart and your family have peace as well. Bless you.
     
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    posed in away i can feel
    the emotions flowin within
    your in my prayers and
    know that we all love you
    peace
    Angel
     
  8. SkinDeep

    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i printed this page out so lovely could see what you all said, and she loved all your comments. She also says thankyou for the prayers and love.

    I wish you all could see her.
    inspite of everything she's gone through she still has glow and happiness around her, and its truely amazing.
     
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    Hey LovelyG.... This made me cry... So emotional.... made me sit down and think.... You are loved... and we are missing you daily ..... But you are in my prayers.... May you find peace in your heart and soul....

    God bless....... :love:
     
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    Dear LovelyGoldenone!

    Dear LovelyGoldenone,

    I know your pain and have cried unto the lord as you.
    But trust him to wrap his arms around you and always
    know what is best for you.
    Right now while you are suffering and feel like it's enough.
    Remember there was suffering for all that God did love.
    His son suffered ultimately for all the sins of you and I...
    and though you crie come get you "HE WILL , but by and by"
    We can not hurry God nor question his true will.
    It pains me that you are suffering and it hurts that you are ill.
    But you are a living testimony of the faithful few, for those who
    are lost and don't know him right now are watching you.
    So dignified I know you are even though on sickness bed you lie.
    Let not the words that others misread see that you have given up
    the fight!!!!!!!!!!!!
    We love you and we pray your strength until his time to gather you
    in. But here is my heartfelt open letter to you...
    "I THINK HE STILL HAS WORK FOR YOU!'

    PS. I am praying for your healing and relief from suffering and not my will
    but GOD's Holy and Blessed will be done.
    You are amazing and you are loved! :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug:
     
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