Black Poetry : I need Love

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need Love

    To be deprived of love
    Is the worst punishment ever
    I feel so caught up and lonely
    I got to get pull myself together

    I’m like a flower that’s dead
    With no water or sunlight
    I need love, I need love
    I need it tonight

    I might as well end it
    Go ahead and cut a wrist
    Can’t live without affection
    And a tender kiss
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmm

    this is how the drought can sieze our hearts and minds...but to end it all???? Where there's life...there's hope of love...for many more tomorrow nights...

    very heavy piece

    thank you

    a
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    know that you aren't alone..

    yet realize that love still exists within you
    which is truly a blessing

    so be thankful :)

    pd
     
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    Very deep....

    love is beautiful indeed
    sweet and sour at times
    Love is like the ocean waves :
    tumbling with a ray of salt
    Love is like the sunshine in mist of drought
    but never as tasting as life
    for there is always another day for love ....
     
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    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm with A~

    being without TRUE love can
    vex the soul...yet, there is still
    hope...
    with the dawining of each day
    there is the hope of love...
    you don't want just any kind of
    love...
    love will come...it will engulf your being
    penetrate your heart and soul...
    it will come...

    awaiting love~
     
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