Black Poetry : I Need Love

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  1. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Waiting for my Queen to come
    Searching for love that I have
    never experience...
    How does it feel to be loved?
    I wish I had the answer...
    Seem like a life time as I wait
    for love to come...
    Wishing I had a woman to
    share my world with
    Wanting to love so bad
    that it becomes depressing
    not experiencing the greatest feeling
    in the world....
    Walking threw the park lonely
    Watching couples pass by holding hands
    Kissing, looking into each other's eyes and saying "I love you"
    That is an experience that I long for.....
    My life feels so incomplete without this feeling
    I guess it's my fault for letting my emotions get the best of me
    but without a woman by my side, I feel so empty
    I need someone to brighten up my world whenever it's gloomy
    I need someone to hold on to in the middle of the night
    I need someone I could be open with about anything
    Like India Arie "I am ready for love"......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and love is ready for u
    this was beautifully pose'd
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where are they in my town wanting love.
     
  4. true love

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    I long to feel
    Soft strong hands in my hair
    In my night vision
    Is a man truely there
    Strong and honest
    Yet child like and modest
    A deep strong hand to wake me in the morning
    A deep stong voice to lull me to sleep at night
    To dream of the love that awaits me in
    The morning light
    King of all kings
    Man of all man
    Love is awaiting your touch
    Find me if you can
     
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    go head brah...
    bust da L.L.
    lol...
    seriously...this was tyte
    keep scribe'n
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Wow..........you are ready, and love will come when you
    least expect it................and with a heart as beautiful
    as you place upon this page, it will stay, rest and
    become a part of you...............

    Absolutely beautiful!
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey... atleast youre honest about it..................
    why do you think that LL cool still hits the centers of all of us with that song......

    hearing the first musical notes in the back of my head now ....
    Tjing ...tjing ..tjing ..tjing ..tjing .............TJING TJING ....when i,m alone in my room somethimes i stare at the wal.....


    i liked reading this ....its just down to earth.......
    i,m shure the brothers and sisters feeling this piece here..


    Love L
     
  8. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You all are too kind, thank you.
     
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