Quiet Poetry Lounge : I NEED HIS LOVE! oh wait... I GOT IT!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sahara heart, Dec 3, 2004.

  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the searching's began! Really not asking for much from a man/ they all say, too many brokem hearts/ say they'll never fall again/ here's my criteria/ spiritually balanced to clean and fill me/ a fine piece of mind/ simply natural/ give me that and i'll stand for you/ all you believe in.../ oh, i will stand high and mighty like a statue/ but hold up... wait/ seem to be tasting ... merely sampling these traits/ then i find out, they are all triffling/ here's my dilemma/ one's my man, one's my KING/ you see, my King and I,/ we existed before the earth/ His loving is a perfect fit/ just cant quit/ His Spirit... OOOOHHH!!/ I need His love, I need His love/... NEED HIS LOVE./ See he reminds me of home/ where the skies are blue/ the trees are green/ and people smile/ I realize, there is no better man/ no better King!/ All u sistah's searching/ I tell you/ Go home and pray!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice piece so forth the love of he u have dear within
    nothing like a Sahara Heart....................................
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice vibe enjoyed the read
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothing like the love of a king who is heaven sent. I liked the way you flowed with this.
     
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    i hope this is a song because i can already hear the music in my mind, beautiful drop.

    Lyr1c
     
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