Black Poetry : I need a Title.

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This has no title and it came form nowhere. If you think of a title let me know. Otherwise just enjoy.


    Your are like the
    brightess beam of light.
    Your words illuminate my
    mind.
    You awaken in me something
    that has been lost for so
    long.
    Lost in the dark that time has
    built.
    Your words find a way to
    break the chains that
    hold my heart captive.
    In you I find a new
    beginning.
    A fresh start.
    I feel reborn into
    this life that
    holds so much
    promise.
    Your touch has a
    way of releasing in
    me emotions that were
    long time buried and
    forgotten.
    I feel an ubelieavable
    attraction to you.
    You are to me like a
    flame to a moth.
    I feel drawn to you and
    I feel no need to fight
    the pull.
    I spread my arms,
    open my eyes ,
    ears and
    mind so that you
    can fill me and make me
    whole.
    I want to be a vessel
    for you.
    Empty and waiting.
    For I know that you
    will fill me with so much
    knowledge that I will not
    be able to contain it all.
    I am willing and waiting to
    be.
     
  2. Therious

    Therious Banned MEMBER

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    i feel your flow
     
  3. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much !!! :look:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i love this piece seem to me like a
    (light to my darken soul)
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERY SWEET FLOW
     
  6. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Angel, $$ Rich$$ and every one for appreciating my work. :jumping:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful poem indeed...

    $$RICH$$...you always come up with the right names at the right time...I like the name too.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another lovely flow...keep them coming.
     
  9. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I belive that $$Rich$$ is right about the title also
    Thank Ya!!!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful...
     
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