Black Poetry : I need a blessing (Part Two)

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  1. Virgil

    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A time in the span of my life, I look into her eyes.
    I see a little sparkle of something special that gives me a rise.
    No game playing, no deceit, never a lie.
    No reason for our mutual trust ever to die.
    How could the dream die?
    As a boy, I imagined her in my mind.
    With her changing images, I guess she got harder to find.
    Now we’ve all been lied to, but what happens when we lie too?
    I’ve lied to myself more than others, too much is due.
    These boulders weigh a great deal as they lay on my shoulders.
    My burdens have plagued me for years as they continue to smoulder.
    There has to be a better way.
    I’ll make some changes today.
    ‘Cause if I don’t, she’ll probably end up with a stray.
    Drifting through life will get you pasted by all of life’s seasons.
    And that’s reason enough to part ways with my demons.
    I know one day I’m gonna meet her, I gotta go forward, get my mind right, but, first Lord, I need a blessing.

    For every woman,
    For every man,
    There is a struggle we must endure.
    Every hour of every day, an opportunity is behind your door.
    Just for life to just feel right.
    For the dark to be consumed by light.
    Nothing but peace, love, and no tension,
    But I really could use a blessing.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was captured from da heart and ya love
    da faith u pose is beauty and surely the blessing
    is to be within closer then one know .......
    very unique and tyte Virgil
     
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    the flow was wonderful...
    a sweet essnces of love
    indeed a blessin closer then you know...
    very nice poet...:angel1:
     
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    a peace and much love to you
    the drop is indeed wonderful
    and i do feel the blessings
    nice scribe indeed
    oh so very nice this is
    Peace
     
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    was wonderin when part II would emerge :)
    next time dont make us wait to long aiight LoL :)
     
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    $$Rich$$ - Thanks, man. This whole series is about faith and the struggle with it.

    mzblkangel - Well, I hope you're right. Thank you.

    Bluewater - I'm pleased to see that you enjoyed this one. I meant it all when I wrote it, and I
    still mean it today.

    triniti424 - Long time, no see. I'm glad you looked at this. Don't worry, part three, which is
    the final part, will come soon.
     
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