Black Poetry : i n s p i r a t i o n

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by uplift19, Mar 29, 2006.

  1. uplift19

    uplift19 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watching
    waiting
    wishing
    she sits on her hands
    concealing divine light
    in her palms
    hesitant
    and regretful
    not living
    just existing
    static
    and unresisting
    constrained
    never persisting
    fearing all things
    unknown,
    known,
    and changing
    too fast for this
    gentle soul

    stagnation

    equal to death
    in destination
    no will
    no drive
    no passion
    self-incarceration

    until that day
    like a breeze
    that tickles your face
    beaming
    glowing
    eyes open
    no more hoping
    thoght-provoking
    you move me
    to the depths
    of my being
    mind
    body
    and spirit
    it was me
    all along
    but my mind
    couldn't conceive it
    what was potential
    is now kinetic
    what was silent
    is now poetic

    you shape my destiny
    adjusting my vision
    to see purpose
    in all things
    you bring out
    the best in me
    the rhythym of life
    flows through me
    you are my
    inspiration
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was beautiful , i always hope someday i could be an inspiration
    to make a different in the poetic maze on somebody..................

    Flow on let it be heard awesome write.
     
  3. uplift19

    uplift19 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the luv rich :hearts4:

    i'm sure you're someone's inspiration ;)
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was some inspiration poet keep them flo's coming.:welldone:
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling your poetry in motion.
    flo on poet.
    One love
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that is so beautiful.
    i know how u feel on this.
     
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    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww this was so sweet
     
  8. uplift19

    uplift19 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the luv everyone :hearts1:
     
  9. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THAT WAZ TIGHT WORK, U GOT SKILLZ,BUT MOSTLY I WAS FEELIN YO FLO, SO FLO ON WIT NONSTOP

    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How'd I miss this one?! Diggin that scribe! Serious depth!

    Flow on my Sista;)