Black Poetry : I n i

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Mar 12, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'M ANYLITICAL SELF CRITICAL
    BELiEVE THAT THE POWERED POLiTiCAL
    STRUCTURE iS CYNiCAL
    NOT COMiCAL
    THE DISTRESS iN THE COMMUNiTiES
    THAT iT OPPRESS
    REFLECTS DESCRiPTiON BiBLiCAL
    i WiTNESS TOO
    HOW THiNGS FALL APART
    LiKE AN OLD APARTMENT TENANT DO
    UNFORGETTABLE
    A PEOPLE MiNED NOT REFiNED
    LiKE A PERFECT MiNERAL
    MY PHYSiCAL LiFE iS SPiRiTUAL
    i MEDiTATE ON WHAT TO DO WiTHOUT A CLUE
    i SAY THE MOST HiGH
    PRAY
    MAKE ME A VESSEL THAT I(You)
    WORK THRU
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderfully beauty-full...

    Your light shines bright.

    Do your thing..which is His thing.
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    true indeed...
    shed da light my brotha....word
    one love
    khasm
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    agreed...
    keep letting your lite shine
    so "men can see your good works
    and glorify ............"

    well done
     
  5. Ujima

    Ujima Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right on! Felt piece!

    Stay focused!
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt dis within deep tyte drop yes yes yes
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What I got from this was that given the last election, one feels like throwing up their hands. Makes ya wanna holla, but you got to keep on moving. Really liked the style of this piece.
     
  8. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SLAMMIN - flow on strong!
    Real n True...

    that's wassup!

    :heart: 2fish
     
  9. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    not bad keep dropping but let me drop this up in here for real yo

    like pants my seam construction is worn
    face mean corruption and scorned
    torn like rotten material picking cotton a miracle
    right now, whiplash, script smash even my lips bashed
    face ethical jerks and technical experts electricals alert the trash
    in my brain, lyrics heat with moisture now eat oysters from sea
    official whack after initial contact with society a variety of debris
     
  10. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one

    one love

    /antar