Black Poetry : I missed you all!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by eternal, Jul 29, 2003.

  1. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I been missing you all!!! Been deployed!!!!

    What You’re Willing to Let Me Be

    Are you willing to be my everything
    To be what makes my heart sing
    And my toes curl
    And make my heart whirl?

    Are you willing to treat me like a queen
    And to not care who sees
    Are you ready to be with me
    Are you ready to set your playa life free

    Are you ready to know what love is about?

    Are you ready to be my king
    Are you ready to learn everything
    That there is to know about me
    Are you scared of what you will see.

    Let me be the one you give your love to
    I am all that you’ve been missing, boo.
    Let me show you the great gifts of life.
    I want to be…

    Something more than a girlfriend.
     
  2. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl I'm askin these men the same question...

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  3. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Preciate It!!

    Thanx for the read, Playwititpimp05!!! Checkin you out right now!!
    Eternal
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice poem!....we miss you too!
     
  5. Alizentang

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    I'm diggin your flow!!

    :jumping:Didn't know you then, but t t t t can't wait to get to know you now.:jumping:
     
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    glad to see i aint the only one strugglin here :) LOL
     
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    this is a nice welcome back joint...
    keep da pen hot
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes i'm willing to be
    all u wish to see
    and comfort thee
    every so gracefully
    yes i am willing
    to let u shine
    in true love and enterwined
    by the candle light dat shine
    yes i can treat u right
    keep ya heart up in flyte
    sho u the loyality of a king
    to his tender queen
    and give love compassionately
    caress u sweetly
    whisper the humble wordz
    to ya heart dis where
    da real bliss start
    so yes .......................u ready
    welcome back
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The question..........to be something more

    Nice flow!
     
  10. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich

    Thank you for welcoming me back so warmly!! Hopefully I can stay for a while!!!
    Overseas is not for me!
     
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