Black Poetry : i missed the forum

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THA HOOKUPMAN, Sep 17, 2004.

  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    i missed the forum


    i was gettin dizzy and my mind was startin'
    to sail like i'm trippin'
    i can see emails in old forum trails
    and i know i'm slippin

    in real time outta my notebook,
    black and white composition
    straight prose rose outta the grave
    psylentz is back in and on the mission,
    but not writing is like no sleep
    it leaves the mind to dyslexic juxtaposition
    of my words
    gobbledygook and gibberish,
    what is this ish, i can't shake
    not writing tho......
    like a bad trip, and gettin' worse,
    dial the undertaker and tell him to call the hearse
    cause

    i missed the forum

    stress being the worse of my altercations
    humanity has me twisted in crippling vibrations,
    running in circles in random automation,
    i sit and stroke my own ego in mental masturbation

    i think i need a vacation from my right brain yawl....
    im too analytical to be considered sane
    just a bit OCD with a touch of MPD, can you follow me
    allow me to introduce myself welcome to monotony
    all cause

    i missed the forum

    though i was content, but i'm really just complacent
    didn't know staying in one place meant
    boredom straight up no ice and no lies
    a wandering spirit tethered and tied to bonding poet chatter
    i'd rather be the former than engage in the latter
    check back rewind, trips like this remind
    that sooner or later i'll be out of time
    i'll have no place in the daily grind

    and i ask you is that really acceptable?
    Up until now i thought i was unmalleable
    a stoic representation of greek deus stature
    perhaps i thought a bit premature
    and immature
    but it doesn't really matter what you think when yer
    lack of sleep leads to
    jerky and repetitive redundancy
    cause man....

    i missed the forum

    my vocab suffering from stuttering
    and mental impotency
    can't get the words out even if they came to me
    had dry eyes - poetry gets the red out
    thank you destee and yawl, when i'm famous, i'll give you a shoutout
    cause man ....i missed the forum ....



    thanks for the understanding...peace and blessings for all.......hookup...... :court: :thanks:
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaaay Brother Hookup :wave:

    Welcome Home !!!!! :grouphug: the Forum missed you too !!! :love:

    where is my dear darling Brother Lowkey ... :wink:

    Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay !!! :jumping:

    Yes Yes Yes ... *sigh* ... Welcome Home Brother !!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome back ! this was very nicely pose'd seem from your heart !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome back!!!! i like the way you brought this... :wave:
     
  5. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    i feel like mase....lol....thanks .... :luvv:
     
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    welcome back holmes...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Well, your well didn't run dry, but it seems you did miss the water....I like the creative way you flowed this poet. Good to read you again.
     
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    uppin dis one again !
    it's sweet to hear how one's heart miss da place of lovin .
     
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    you seem to keep creating...and you bring it back to us..
    so when you go away even for a day..sorry that it makes you ache
    but we look forward to the next awake....ning
    to welcome you to the forumn..
     
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