Black Poetry : i miss you...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i miss you
    i miss the style of you
    i miss the smile every once in a while
    of you

    {i know i said that...}

    i miss you
    every heartbeat and breath of you
    the dreams...and the rest of you
    every inch and curve of that 5'1" frame of you
    the wonderful heart and soul of you

    {DID I SAY THAT I MISS YOU?}

    you enter a room with confidence
    YOU'RE SURE
    not an overbearing arrogance
    {but} DEMURE
    you know the effect you have
    THAT'S STRAIGHT
    when loose lips step up
    YOU REGULATE.

    {i just wanted you to know that...}

    i miss you
    not just the down right dirty of you
    {i miss} the sensual touch of you
    when you ask if it's the sex of you
    i have to admit...yeal, i miss that, too

    i miss you
    that's included in the ALL OF YOU.:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Baller

    its cool to miss her
    its cool to love her
    did i tell u that she

    MISS U TOO.......say dem words bru.:rolleyes:
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww! Baller,

    This melts my heart. You write so well. Thanks

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TRUTH $$RICH$$...

    unfortunately, things can't be the way they were...so, we moved on. at least, that's what we keep telling each other.:(

    coco...THANKS for the kind words. gotz nut'n but MADD BRUTHALY LOVE for ya. but you know this.:)

    THANKS FOR READING ME.
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this says it so well, baller....

    there are those whose essence never leaves us..

    wow

    thank you

    a
     
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    this is sooooo beautiful baller..I'm sure she misses all of you too

    *reminisce*
     
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    even after

    both of you moving on...

    it is beautiful to see how you can write so knowingly and lovingly about all of her..tender words...

    K
     
  8. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    many thanks, my sistahz.

    there are those who touch our lives in such a way that their absence only serve to remind us of their presence. in knowing her, i was blessed.

    thanks for reading me.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEAUTIFUL READ , BEAUTIFUL SENTIMENT

    you made me smile and then you made me cry!
    But then you're just that kind of guy!
    keep vibing in the positive and scribe on.........Love MSLB
    Blessings on Ya House!
     
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    Baller.....

    This is sooooo beautiful.....


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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