Black Poetry : I miss you

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Momma I miss you today
    In da worst way..
    Wish you was here with me..
    But my soul is alive…
    Remembering you..
    Momma this for you..
    See I found my way..even though
    Part of me left with you..
    But my love is strong..
    To keep it together…
    I break down some..more then others..
    But my whole being seems to
    Stay stronger…I lift my head in
    Praise to you…
    You shown me to be a woman and
    how to take care
    Of me and love others..
    You always gave that helping hand..
    To strangers to family
    To whom every it needed to be given to
    You did it…
    Your bloom became a rose..
    It fades at times…but with your up bringin
    It pops right back up…
    in that deep red color and thrives
    and continue to grow…now I know
    I still got a lot to learn..without you
    It is harder..but I seem to make do..
    The riches thing I know..is love thyself..
    I learned from you..and to be who I am
    Because I am who I am..to be…that I know
    Now makes me special…thank you momma
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so heart felt and deeply well done
    feelin every line in my heart
    very well written with da love and devotion
     
  3. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet, lots of heartfelt emotion...
    thanks for sharing
     
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    nice poem. its really strait from the heart.
     
  5. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You've done it again, Tight work...lady!!!
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey now fam..thanks for da love..
    glad ya just came to read..
    much love....:angel1:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww...hope ya uneasiness finds rest :)
     
  8. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwww.......this was so sweet angel......keep yo head up sis...always remeber that she's there with you in spirit...never forget it......much luv
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo da read fam...
    triniti..girl glad ya feelin better...
    :wave:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwww, this is so sweet, girl. love this pretty tribute.
     
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