Black Poetry : I Miss You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartfelt, Oct 24, 2003.

  1. Heartfelt

    Heartfelt Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As the seconds, minutes, days, and the months go by
    I wonder if I will ever hear your voice again
    I've cried and envisioned you at night
    Holding me tight and liberating me of the pain

    I've longed to touch you in all the right places
    To laugh with you and see you make funny faces
    I've dreamed that we would live a life together
    And that our love would last forever

    I've tried to hold on to a love that strayed from me
    But I've come to find that everlasting love doesn't stay for eternity
    I can't bear the fact that you left me wondering and wandering
    I never saw you and, for me, that was bothering

    I prayed over the months that you would call me
    Wondered if you really did love me
    I was gripping on to something that didn't really exist
    But I just wanted to say that it was you I missed

    I love you!!!
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice Heartfelt

    If only he knew.. how could he refuse such a love.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt ......one not know of such sweet love u have
    tyte flow
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like this
     
  5. URGelus

    URGelus Active Member MEMBER

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    I have had a few nights like this. Just wondering where he is and what he is doing, but most importantly is he thinking about you too. I really like this!


    Scribe On

    URGelus
     
  6. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow, well felt.
     
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    Emotionally strong. I like this alot.
     
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