Black Poetry : I miss u

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by yahsistah, Apr 8, 2004.

  1. yahsistah

    yahsistah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I miss u and i miss u and i miss you
    and i wish that u were here
    theres so much i want to say
    right now
    but the words keep getting in the way
    i miss u and i miss u and i miss u
    and i wish that u were near
    every mornin that i wake up
    i look to see your face
    only to see that your not there
    with me
    my heart is crying out for you
    right now right now right now
    thats what i wanna say right now
    i miss u and i miss u and i miss u
    and i wish that u were here
    l love you i love you i love you
    i miss u baby
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can I please sing this?much love I like this piece :hot: :hot:
     
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    yahsistah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    actually

    actually.....
    its a song that i wrote lol
    and i first sang it then just now wrote it down in here.
    are u a singer??
     
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    I love to sing,I was in my youth choir at church....but they havin some issues lol and my mom really wants me to go back I'm still singing though I just get stage fright aaaa looooot.Because I have a nice flowing alto voice and I'm still the section leader at church and...yea I guess I can sing lol
    Your poem just really made me want to start singing it
     
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    very nice scribe

    I miss talkin to you
    I miss your expressions
    I miss your laugh
    I miss your writing
    I miss your sense of humor
    I miss your rudeness :lol:



    yeah, sing that song, yahsistah
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and SensualReality
     
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    :deal: Ahhhh nice drop sis it's nice u finally droped us a flow. ;)
     
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    WOW!!!!!!

    I REALY LIKE THIS SISTA :spin: !!! I WOULD LOVE TO HEAR YOU SPEAK OR SING IT!!
    KEEP IT COMING SISTA!!! ;)
    MUCH LOVE TO YOU YAH!!!!!!
     
  9. yahsistah

    yahsistah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin the love awww

    thanks yall
    sistah gempis thanks for that addition
    yeah i know its about time i finally dropped a flow on here right
    actually its a song/something ibeen working on
    not really done yet
    but thought i'd share it
    much love blessings yall
     
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    Alright!!!!!!

    a very nice 1st posted perm....lolol poem for you non-chatters....lolol
    This was nice Yahsistah :)
     
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