Black Poetry : I Miss Me Some Him

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by fade, Oct 4, 2004.

  1. fade

    fade Member MEMBER

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    I Miss Me Some Him

    From the first day I meant him he was like a dream come true,
    It’s really nothing that he couldn’t or wouldn’t even do.

    He taught me things that I really didn’t think that I was able to do.

    Everyday that I don’t talk to or see him I’m missing him.
    He opened up my eyes to a whole new world.

    I miss him caressing my chest, I miss lying on his muscular chest.
    I miss playing ball in the park, I really hate that we are so far apart.

    I miss when I sat on his lap he started to sweat, I never understood that, but I never thought it to be a threat, but I sure hate that we wasn’t together long enough for him to make me sweat.

    Hopefully one day he will opens his eyes and realize that I’m the one he truly needs to be with, but in the mean time I guess I have no choice, but to miss me some him….​
     
  2. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    awright fade..
    sorry you miss some him
    but glad you are using that energy to create...
    keep on creating...flowing
    and maybe in your missing him
    you will find more of you...
    thanks for the flow...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hopefully one day he will opens his eyes and realize..

    i feel ya on dis right here
    love the flow very heartfelt
    enjoyed this one
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Thumbs up!!!

    You placed the "Fade" on this poem right here! :bullseye:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WORD UP ON DIS EMOTIONS OF FLOW
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww sister smh its the worse to miss one you feel for so much... May your soul find its peace :)
     
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    ...aaawe, this was so sweet
    it's like that untarnished love
    the beginning pure and innocent
    well conveyed feelings in this piece...

    let it flow poet...
    we're listening

    Oneluv,
    Sage
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know youre motion sis and feel it..


    nice amd short honestly put it down...





    i miss him to....


    i miss my soulmate..


    whoever wherever he is ..

    there out there...



    let soulmates conect,,,, :couple:




    loveLibertylady:heart:
     
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    This flow reminds me of lovers past. So grateful the love of my life awakens to me every morning. How blessed it is to be loved.

    Excellent and real scribe poetess:)
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhh.....this is cute!!!
     
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