Black Poetry : I Miss His Poetry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Nov 8, 2005.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Miss His Sweet, Sweet poetry
    I Miss the way you flowed to me

    I Miss your spoken words so bold
    I Miss the way it curled my toes

    I Miss the way you rhyme my name
    I Miss the feeling of going insane

    I Miss how your flow haunt my dream
    I Miss how it made me beg "baby please"

    I Miss his poetry

    I Miss the fire that it sparked
    I Miss the desire that it embarks

    I Miss the flow that rolled like the waves
    I Miss how it made me misbehave

    I Miss his Poetry

    It was the fire to my heart
    It was an affair of the art

    I Miss the Poetry You Sung To Me
    Setting My Inner Feeling Free

    I Miss his Poetry
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  2. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im miss her poetry
    The way the blue was wiped from my face
    The water see the water sway against my face
    I miss her poerty like it was an angel beneath my feet
    I loved when she spelled out P-O-E-T-R-Y
    I miss her poetry
    It keeped me up all night
    I miss her poetry like my throwback all right
    I miss her poetry like the snow in the winter
    So pure So soft I can still remember
    I miss the gift her poetry brung
    When a name needed to be screamed it was hers hun
    I miss her poetry cause it reminds me of you
    Like the blue water over oceans im still thinking of you
    Letting my mind go when her poetry embraces my soul
    When her poetry I miss took care of home
    See her poetry was more than rhymes that mixed
    We were deep she was deep in my poetry mix
    I miss her......

    Nice Flow Poet!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I miss the way ya words play
    and how it made me stay
    i miss the glist of the tone
    when ya words roll in song
    i miss her poetry
    the poetic sweet that had my
    mind and body dancing in beat
    i miss the flava
    the rapture it made
    and the verse of humble play
    how it made me desire
    and set off a yearning fire
    i miss her poetry
    how it had me on my toes
    and my fingers to a butter stroll
    i miss her soft zest
    and the way my body confess
    i miss her
    i miss her
    yes i do her poetry

    Bluewater this was awesome i love it , i love it , i love it !!!
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i miss it to flow on poet.
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Missing all that makes up him, smooth and so genuinely flowed. Very warm vibe poetess.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very warm vibes here...loving this...

    Peace
    Angel
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i loved this...
     
  8. queentswana

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    I'm a witness that poetry can do all that and some, wow, do I know
    love this piece blue, thanks
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmmmm :read:

    Yanno sistah ya words have a way of pulling folks into it

    (as you can see from brotha Rich's & Tantrum's responses) :)

    it makes me miss it and I dont even know what it is LOL :)
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l didn't know you felt that way about me :D
    jk

    i thought this was simple and nice.
     
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