Black Poetry : I Might

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by miomina1, Apr 29, 2004.

  1. miomina1

    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I'm feelin' what I'm feelin'
    And I feel it all the time
    I might go shoot some baskets
    Or I might commit a crime
    I might go steal some candy
    To satisfy my need
    I might just cut my wrist and die
    I might not even bleed
    I might go to a church one day
    I might not go at all
    I might just hate to get up
    Or I might just like the fall
    I might just leave, the way I came
    Alone with out a friend
    I might go ask my sister
    If she has a five to lend

    I might go find a book to read
    I might just walk away
    I might go take a nap for now
    And wake again someday
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a very nice flow
    it reminds me that sometime
    we need a moment
    this flow was very relaxing
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    miomina,
    "i might" has a nice flow and poetic feel to it.....
    i enjoyed reading it
    u might just pick up a pen
    and put it all in words
    and place it on this poetry site
    to be both seen and read
    and that might be
    an excellent step
    as it was in this case
    words etched into the lives of others
    nerver to be erased................

    Peace and Blessings
     
  4. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This sound like me on my 'uck it days lovin this piece
    flow on:wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i might , i might
    this was on point
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The flow and ease of this was great, nice one here.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very enjoyable easy read
    like the flow indeed
    i get them days too
    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice rhyme...

    loved rasheeds flow too

    great read...
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THis is the snt, I might have to have this when its published. This poem is on point :deal:
     
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