Black Poetry : I MESSED UP

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  1. cathy

    cathy New Member MEMBER

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    I MESSED UP

    I LIED !!!I LIED!!! I LIED!!!!
    IS THAT WHAT YOU WANT TO HERE
    I CANT HELP HOW I FEEL
    MY LOVE I GAVE TO YOU
    WELL DEAR! IT WAS REAL
    MY LOVE FOR MY HUSBAND
    WELL THAT IS REAL TOO
    I TRYED TO STOP LOVING HIM
    WHICH MADE ME COME TO YOU
    I COVERD MY PAIN WITH YOUR ARMS
    AND MY TEARS WIPED AWAY WITH YOUR HANDS.
    YOU GAVE ME A FEELING OF LOVE
    BUT I HAVE TO ADMIT HE GAVE ME THAT TO
    YOU GAVE ME A SENCE OF HOPE, BUT ONCE AGAIN HE HAD HOPE IN US
    YOU GAVE ME A GOOD TIME, WHEN A GOOD WE HAD

    I MESSED UP

    HE HAS TAKEN ME BACK IN HIS HEART, OUR FAMILY OUR LIFE WE ONCE SHARED.
    SO, INSTEED OF LIEING TO YOU AGAIN IM TELLING HOW IT IS

    IM GOING HOME

    AND, NOT JUST TO MY FAMILY,
    AND NOT JUST TO THE LIFE WE SHARED
    BUT IM GOING HOME TO HIM
    IM SORRY
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was deep...
    but i understand you...
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to DESTEE ...Cathy

    This is a very nice flow. Of emotion and poetic insight.
     
  4. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautiful...and a right decision indeed. much love.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of bond & love
    welcome as u share and give as i bless dis from above
    sometime we tell this lie to our self but the heart speaks truth
    love this flow of heart felt emotions welcome!:)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    i understand, read it and i thought dam..
    so much love, for one, cop a heart for the fam

    rock the bells, tender love and deep canals
    relations, relating to them who flow bout loves fouls

    out of bounce
    words are tight, rolled and blow like an ounce
     
  7. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to Destee Family.....

    This was so powerful.... it hit my soul.... I loved this.... I liked the decision made in the end.... I once heard, "Real love conquers all..."
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    I agree with the others....This was super powerful and emotionally deep!

    You really bared your soul in this.

    I hope you were able to repair what was torn.




    And :birthday:
     
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