Black Poetry : i make love to my poetry

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  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I make love to my poetry,
    in between soft white sheets of college ruled symmetry
    my mighty lead leads as she mimics me.
    Overcome by my mastery of melodic metaphor-play,
    she dares not stray.
    As my tongue lyrically laps at the gentle folds of her lavish literature,
    she seductively sucks on my silent syllables,
    desperate to devour my diction.
    Nibbling at the nectar of her nouns while figuratively fingering her phases, she sings to me with verbal praises.
    Cause I make love to my poetry.
    I open the folds of her pages and penetrate with deep thrusts of intense intellect. Instantly inducing an overflow of ideas.
    Persistently pounding her pronouns with precise wordplay.
    Softly stroking the seams of her synonyms,
    while she harmoniously hums the heavenly hymns of my homonyms.
    With every stroke of my pen, the deeper I descend til she finally begins to shiver within.
    Completely astounded by my mental endowment, she still can figure out
    how her lips got around it.
    And as my words submerge to the depths of her verbs,
    I start to observe all the love she deserves.
    So I give her my all, from first verse to final
    and flow with a rhythm that gyrates her spinal.
    And as one we peak, to complete an act so sweet,
    eager to repeat she discreetly deletes.
    After saving our progress, I’m anxious to digress.
    Cause when my pen hits her flesh, I never know what’s next.
    And that’s the part I love best, cause it keep our love fresh.
    So it’s to you I confess, that I make love to my poetry.


    Copyright 2004
    © Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The alliteration, rhythm, and depth of this piece....awesome. Like a writer thoroughly seduced by his muse, you penned this piece with passion. I enjoyed this to the utmost poet. Welcome to destee.com. I'll be waiting to read more from you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    tyte write sweet release
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home you found full
    of love & peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless ya flow some love
    keep scribing ! :hiya: :juggle:

    Do enjoy and hope you stay within the community
    look to read more of you soon ! visit our poetic Etiquette Rules above
    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11896
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a confession...

    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:

    Oh....Oh...Oh...Oh...Oh

    My poetic thirst has so been quenched

    Poet...you've got the poet in me doing mental somersaults

    and I don't even know where to start to convey how quick-witted,

    canny and spirited I find your work...

    This was so intoxicating...and sensational...

    Encore...Please write MORE :D
    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: ​
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    very nice very nice.....i know how you feel this was awesome flowing enjoyed it...
     
  6. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fields of wackiness these eels can’t attack this they too weak

    My dome spin harm like a strong windstorm advice to these freak

    ***** hurry eat and duck **** feet get struck by lightning

    I represent history step and sent mystery to brains left head

    Blistery in pain I’m lyrically lame as even my health bled

    For war I crave bolder than a brave soldier a fad creator

    Fight as a Gladiator like Russell Crowe no lad is greater

    Harm the world like a farm girl with her skirt up this

    Dirt corrupt like porn flicks and sex born chicks that twist

    Hips when walking then talking about colorful panties
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome welcome welcome brotha tzevi :wave:

    so nice to see you here in the forums :)


    I hope you can enjoy this home...OUR home (which includes you ;) )

    THIS...was... *chills* BREATHTAKING

    you made love to poetry and the result was a poetic child manifest...simply beautiful :)

    Hope to read more soon :read:
     
  8. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    loved the linguistic loveplaay
    poeting to your muse..
    poeting
    poet..
    very nice....
    very.....
     
  9. Blkthunder

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    Nice--let me drop one...

    The poetry I love
    Its just a glove
    The true hand
    is a man
    iron fist in silk glove
    On words we fly like air for doves
    I get higher than they want me to be
    Cause from here I see from shore to sea
    I dip and dabble in a word pattle
    back and forth i rock to be rolled
    Someone please tell the stories untold
    Let the myth unfold
    butterfly, butter this guy
     
  10. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all right blk thunder somebody catching and finailly dropped a verse also ok here we go

    The bad rise to storm so I advised and worn like the weather

    Channel whatever to be handled is on dopler radar so clever

    Ride in popular gray car forever, my love affair satisfaction

    So I prepare for action, “look baby cake, lady great give a fraction

    Of my love like Toni Braxton with a thug lets date tonight

    At a true bright restaurant any debate on that boo?” few might

    Turn you down MADD, but I’m plenty alert in a mini-skirt

    Not just any jerk get this with a wet kiss they end truly hurt

    Guys shook at a party just look at my body as a community

    Of opportunity cum with puny lines I listen but even a luni-

    Tic can catch on to their game they’re boring I’m not whoring

    Just ignoring them but they adoring trim on my panties emotions soaring”
     
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