Black Poetry : i made love to you...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Made Love To You.

    It was a COOL night

    We sat on the deck of our home
    Playfully teasing each other
    While gazing at the stars
    As mellow jazz breezed through the speakers

    Your laced panties
    Slowly descended sculptured thighs
    Revealing…Swollen lips that oozed WOMAN JUICE
    Its scent assuaged my senses
    As your excitement sang songs of
    “COME…taste this.”

    You are indescribably delicious
    And, yet…tasteless
    So intoxicating is the aroma of your scent

    ~~~~~

    The most
    Recognizable
    Odor in the world
    ~ For a man ~
    Is that of a well-kept
    Y U N N I

    It is a scent that
    Allures
    Entices
    Excite the male senses
    It is the spark that ignite the flame
    Awakening subtle reactions
    To its consequential action
    Stimulating sexual nerve endings
    Activating yearnings
    That send emergency alert messages
    To mind, body, and soul

    WAKE UP.

    ~~~~~

    The Jacuzzi beacons us

    Feeling mischievous
    We slip into the churning waters
    Playfully reaching for one another

    Kenny G’s “song birds”
    Now blowing through the speakers

    Pulling you close, I hold you
    Softly caressing your outer regions

    You turn your back to me

    As you lean over the side
    You push your tush gently into me
    All-so-innocently rotating your hips
    Til I dipped lower

    ~~~~~

    With an opening of your thighs
    You invite me into your den of delight
    Juicy wet
    But snuggly tight

    (it was the expression on your face that told me where you were)

    Johnson stood at the entrance of yunni
    Ready and willing for the next step
    …to happen
    When crown intrudes upon moistening folds
    Invading (exploring) the depths of
    Your treasure trove

    Yunni’s glove-like fitness
    Increases the sensitivity
    Of your inner-muscled activity
    As heightened pleasure
    Lead to profound delight

    I fight for each moment I’m in you
    …On you
    In contact with you

    A mating chant
    Crossed luscious lips
    As your hips did a sensual
    Bump-and-grind
    While pushing into me

    You held me deep

    I wanted to scream
    P L E A S E ! ! !
    As you MASTERfully massaged
    Mister Johnson
    From CROWN to base
    All trace of inhibition
    Happily dissolved into
    NOthingNESS
    As your quest for
    MAN-seed
    Began

    You bathed me in natural oils
    That spoke of the “spoils of pleasure”
    Offered to the invader of
    Nooks and crannies
    After the eye-candy
    Melts away

    ~~~~~

    As I settled in
    Your hips took up an east-west
    North-south kinda rhythm
    With a rotation at the end

    (there was a moan)

    I thought it was you
    But as I realized my slippage
    I flopped
    …tried to stop
    But all restraint was LOST
    And I gave myself over to the sensation

    ~~~~~

    Then the pounding came
    …the huffing and puffing
    The heartbeat rushing
    Skin-smack soulful dancing
    ‘Til “yunni” gave a standing “O”
    Our bodies drenched in sweat

    You tried to control yourSELF

    But PLEASURE wasn’t having it
    And your body began to writhe
    As your stomach muscles contracted
    And you acted like you’d never had any before

    I made love to you

    ‘Twas a trembling in your voice
    That accompanied the “moan”
    That generated the “sigh”
    That announced the “cry:”

    O, Baby! Why art thou treating me so nicely?

    Body quaking

    Gasping for air

    Wanting to scream but wouldn’t dare

    As the tremors in your stomach
    And thighs
    Began to subside
    You released me

    Nervously
    I tried to stand
    But standing wasn’t good
    In the shape I was in
    Could not comprehend
    A vertical stance

    So, I lay there
    Pressing down into you
    As you held me, Tightly
    Biting me

    ~~~~~

    ‘Til the tempo decreased
    …the rooting ceased
    The heart stopped excessing
    The blood stopped racing
    And engorged parts returned to their normal inflation

    I made love to you

    But it wasn’t as if
    SEXual INterCOURSE
    Was the only thing we did

    I shared a special part of me
    …a special moment with you
    Loved you with my voice
    …My touch

    I loved every part of you
    Even the “innermost feelings” of you

    It’s true

    I quieted your cries with kisses to the eyes
    And wiped each tear track away

    I moved gentle hands over silken skin
    As I bent to the will of your heart

    I made love to you

    ~~~~~

    I didn’t have to ask
    “How was it?”

    The expression on your face told me that

    We made love

    We tested the waters of
    Physical intimacy

    And we survived

    We explored the realm of
    Karma-sutra styled loving
    And all its possibilities

    And we thrived

    We made love

    We
    Kissed
    And
    Caressed
    And made a mess
    Of every room we blessed
    With our care-free
    Love and happiness.

    We held hands
    ~ As we looked into each others eyes ~
    And cried

    We made love

    I tasted your tongue
    …Your nipples
    Your yunni
    As I EXploRED the regions
    Of your g-SPOT
    Felt the quiver of your heart
    As your insides turned out

    I touched the heart of your soul
    And…Refused to let go

    I made love to you

    And it was good.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Love n' emotion this was awesome tyte.....making moonlight love in da deep depth
    of her essence is hot like jazz and extreme mixing .....do ya thang bruh !
    make her feel da love u pose
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    making love...

    is always so much more complex that JUST sex. ALTHOUGH, there is a time for some good sEx, now.:) THANKS for reading, $$RICH$$ MAN.
     
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    this was intense love the way you put it down baller!
     
  5. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love is the most powerful emotion...

    when exercised, its intensity grows, exponentially...until...SWEET RELEASE.

    THANK YOU
     
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    baller:
    I read this piece after the "i wanna be with you" piece.
    I was unable to post to this one as I was still over
    come with so much emotion from the prior one.
    That's why your one of my Gods of Poetry.
    You send me outside of myself and sometimes
    I dont want to come back...sometimes...
    I cant....so I have to take a moment to re-adjust.

    Can we say More Passion....More Passion....



    Much Luv
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dang playa

    you are a BALLER!

    and i ain't mad at cha

    :tennis:
     
  8. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    from the depths of my core...

    i pour out liquid life...'til that day GOD sends me MY wife...and we live my dream. it seems, life is good today. THANK YOU.
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Alrighty-then! I see Imma hafta take you in small doses!

    This was....whew!...Yes, it was...well-uh, hmmm....(exhale) :welldone:
     
  10. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that might be good for you...

    ...but would it be much fun.:) enjoy the waves.

    and the river floweth.
     
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