Black Poetry : I Made a Wrong Turn....

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I made a wrong turn somewhere....
    I took a right at depression
    and turned directly into oblivion.
    Oblivion lasted an eternity,
    at least in my nearsighted vision,
    forcing me to stumble into
    a time warp, letting me off in denial.
    Denial dropped me off into
    the sea of disbelief, while
    the sea ran into despair,
    at which point I was mentally
    just thrown, and made a
    pit stop at pity.
    Living in my present reality
    of self realization,
    where do I go from here?
    Search me, search me Lord.
    Provide me a roadmap that's clear
    direct me to your love so dear
    protect me in faith always near
    because I made a wrong turn, somewhere...
     
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    that turn we all made somewhere down the road
    but u know i didn't look back i looked up and that
    path was the right way the taste is bitter but i smile
    well felt sistah
     
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    Better to look up than back, I hear that, search me lord...Thank you for feeling this and responding so.
     
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    tight scribe sis..
    he hear yall..your flow is deep..
    i do feel you on this much love
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    I am blessed that the one above knows all and sees all, we all are, thanks so much Blue.
     
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    that was knee deep...
    making the wrong turn is not bad...not bad at all...what's bad is making the wrong turn and staying there...that's bad. We all in one way or another took that turn. And if we never see the bad...we can never fully appreaicate the GOOD when it comes... right? we all know that God is on call 24-7
    I felt and lived every word...4 moons ago :bomb: lol...But I took a ride on a (higher) plane an everything was history after that...

    nice drop...feeling ya...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, there's nothing worse than lingering in the wrong decision, true, queentswana. Boarding that higher plane and waiting to take flight...thank you.
     
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    nice flow scibbing is your gift. Dont ever let it go
     
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    No matter where u turn my sister He will be righr there 4 u just allow him into your life. Loved this flow indeed.
     
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    as u make wrong turns you learn from them....
    and you continue to grow.....
     
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