Black Poetry : I,m just a Woman

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I,m just a woman...

    a woman..

    nothing more
    nothing less
    that needs to love...
    that needs to be loved
    needs to be fed....
    needs to be rocked
    needs to be hold
    needs to be mould
    nutured....
    caressed.....
    comfort......
    someone who protects..

    a woman...


    yes i cry.....
    i fear.....
    i doubt.....

    when the lights goes off...
    i miss the shoulder....
    the warm bed...
    the kisses goodnight..
    or the softly ones in my neck ...
    or breasts.....
    i,m just a woman
    I do find happyness in the
    simple little things ,and al the beauty that god brings..
    cooking, cleaning
    playing with the children,
    nature
    drawning
    painting
    singin a song
    you know.......taking care of my Home..

    but my brother.....
    i,m just a woman
    nothing more
    nothing less
    not to deep
    not to complexed
    but until i find my place

    i,m just RESTLESS......
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH MY SISTA!

    But you are so much more than just a woman!
    Every woman is! And when we realize that and own it.
    We can claim our Kings and reign in our kingdoms unafraid,
    unchallenged and secure in the knowledge that we have
    divine purpose because we are "Wo-men" oh we are more
    than just "A woman"...givers of life, nuturers too...no one
    can do what you and I do!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya most def more then one know
    a lovin soul for a heart to hold
    ya a Queen
    da comfort u lone
    is within my lovin arms
    da compassion u taste
    is within my heart
    ready to feed u love
    ready to give u da joy
    ya more den a woman
    ya a jewel
    da black essence of love
     
  4. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear the calling of your soul.
    Feel mine. It's near.
     
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    We are more then just a women. We are something that should hold our heads up and be proud. Without women in the world were would it be. It takes our strong personalities to help keep the world going. Women we are but never just a woman. Many times we write things they never apply to us (the writer). But I am writing this to encourage any sister that feel that they our just a women. Remember women we are but never just a women.
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks beautifull people.......
    i know we are '' more than a Woman"...

    i kinda ment this poem in a way...is not easy to explain....
    it has to do with the fact that alot of people...look at me like....i,m tuff ,. i manage ....that i dont need ...the love of a..man ..that i,m better of alone....i,m not.....i ment with the JUST.....that thing ......and Ya,ll lady,s know what i,m talking about.!....(......
    its in the chapter..genises..........THE DESIRE OF A WOMAN WILL ALWAYS GOES OUT TO HER MAN............(with respect for the gay ladys)..i hope ya guys didnt understand it wrong................
    for exemple.........the cleaning and cooking................hey..i,m a charly,s angel...a..Indepented woman...........but there still is somthing missing..........thats it
     
  7. Monalisa

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    I'm feelin ya on this one!

    "I'm strong, but I'm not unbreakable"
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :huh: owie thank you all for youre warm responds...my lordy...

    i feel the love and i send it back :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:





    Love L
     
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    Just a woman, but oh does that mean so much..deep flow.
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

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    I'm just a woman
    nothing more
    nothing less-relax
    I don't come with
    complicated instructions

    I'm just a woman
    nothing more
    nothing less-than
    one who enjoys femininity
    and knows her strength
    not above nor beneath
    any man

    I'm just a woman
    nothing more
    nothing less-than
    one of God's precious
    creatures willing to give
    and receive his basic essentials


    Thanks for sharing your inspiring poem :)



    definitely
    feelin' your flow :)
    Coco :heart:
     
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