Black Poetry : I LUV TO READ HIS POETRY

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I luv to read his poetry
    his mental is deeper than the bluest sea
    always causing me to think
    more in-tense-ly
    about what was….
    was is….
    and what could be….

    Everything he writes about
    seemingly speaks to me
    and all i want to do is
    read…read…read…
    more and more of….his poetry

    He verbalizes with such ease
    poetically pleasing me to the core
    opening up those hidden and locked doors
    his essences makes my psyche soar

    Words that penetrate and stimulate
    mind, body and soul
    never afraid if he may appear
    to come off too bold
    his mission is to express
    the vast knowledge that he knows

    his mind is so divine
    his heart massages mine
    seduces me poetically
    line after line
    no wonder i find myself
    lost within his words
    with no sense or comprehension of time

    Sometimes I meditate that he
    would pen a scribe especially
    for me
    read it on a quite winter’s nite
    when the stars in the sky
    are so still and bright
    sprayed in a beautiful moonlight

    Mesmerizing me with history
    that makes luv to my mind
    i over stand why…
    he luved her from first site
    the 2 of them together
    procreates more than just life

    To say he’s gifted would not be just or fair
    words spill from his pen with no effort
    poetic telepathy at its best
    the art of creating verse after verse
    from thin air

    He’s endowed from his ancestors day
    poetry can be found in the makeup of his DNA
    and i so luv the way that
    he says what he says

    I Luv to read his poetry
    so much i had to create
    this poem of poetic praise
    because every time I read him
    i’m left Poetically AMAZED!!!!!
     
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    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is probably the third time I saw the word over-stand ... I probably used it myself in a rhyme or two. This was a great piece and a wonderful ode to a wonderful poet ... whoever he may be :) Keep cre8'n sis, I want to read more of you.
     
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    decipherx1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was beautiful sister keep up the great work.
     
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    THANK YOU...

    presumptuous...and bold...i know.:)

    beautifully scripted.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesomely lovely piece to a poet .....u created a masterpiece ya self that's amazing
     
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    It's so easy for one to see and feel the luv, the vibes of another's poetry when inside their self holds the same,
    Infact I know there's someone that reads your poetry, ...who feels that very pain.
    One never knows how they touch others lives ... or how one may feel when they hear the sweet vibes!!
    This is a piece I can truely relate too, excellent piece poet!!
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gsalt:
    You know I always luv it when you stop
    by....Thank you for the kind words.
    Haven't been writing much but starting
    to feel that twitch again.:)


    Peace decipher:
    Your words were beautiful
    Thank you!!!


    baller:
    You are very welcome!!!! lol
    This piece is fitting of YOU and a few
    other poetic brothas here. However,
    I have to admit I did write it with
    someone in mind. Thanks for the visit.


    $$RICH$$:
    Thanks so much, your words of
    kindness are much appreciated.



    queentswana:
    Your words are so very true and lovely
    just like you!!!! Thank you very much!



    Much Luv & Peace

    :heart:4EVER
     
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    that was nice liked it and look

    BLAKVERB your facts are words to the heart never depart your poems are a long cherished bold desire the words set my soul on fire they bury me in the very seas of understanding and demanding my atention not to mention stranding my imagination shook over worldly pleasures and earthly treasures are not food for the soul but your poetry is keep writing while I'm on the street fighting criticism but your rhymes are igniting my wisdom dude, have to abandon the grief and the randon beef don't let it get you down i regret not having the crown like you do a king in bling and now I sing a song of love to you cotinue your menu and do what you do so good
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace rhymebad:
    Thank you for the read however, I think you may have
    posted in error. This poem was not written for or about
    blakverb. No disrespect intended, blakverb is a very talented poet!

    4EVER
     
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    Hi 4Ever...

    Masterful poets are like a powerful joint that when inhaled can take us on some incredible highs!
    I can so relate to your expression and agree, there are a few poets who’s words are definitely in motion.

    Awesome write!

    feelin’it souldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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