Black Poetry : I Loved You Into A Better Man

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A BROTHER WRITES FROM A SISTA'S ANGEL....


    I saw you and instantly I fell in love...

    You took my breath away.
    You took my heartbeat.
    Each beat, each breath grew faint...
    Because instantly I fell in love with you.

    And with time you expressed your love for me.
    It was a Godly harmony.
    So our journey began.
    To become one from two -
    the path was long and winding.

    Loving you
    Feeling you
    Coming to know
    But what I didn't know brought revelation

    I didn't know your spirit of promiscuity
    I didn't know your lying spirit
    I didn't know your low regard for women
    I didn't know how you manipulate women and men
    But I loved you through it all

    I discovered number after number
    You told lie after lie
    I found out how ran your "game" on my sisters
    Everyone around you, you sought to control
    And I loved you through it all.

    women
    lies
    games
    manipulations
    God helped me love you through it all.

    And with time
    Because I loved you as God loved me
    I saw change.
    Awesome change.

    I saw promiscuity turn to faithfulness
    I saw a wicked tongue of lies turn to a holy tongue of truth
    I saw you praise and exhault what you once abuse - black women
    I saw you became a servant to all mankind.
    Because I loved you into a better Man.

    commitment for a lack of
    honesty for a lack of
    respect for a lack of
    love for a lack of
    Because I loved you into God's Man.

    COPYRIGHT 2002 WELL OF 7 PUBLISHING
    ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
     
  2. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love it.
    I love it.
    I love it.

    Much :heart:
     
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    Oh Yeah!!! Bounce...

    This here is too Tyte Bruh!!
    Make me want to tell my wife thank you...
    my soul is touched...
    Sweet flow my brutha!!
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HAVE MERCY JESUS! OOOOOOOOOOOH!

    Now,now you got a sista amening and shaking her leg getting ready for a shout for real. Cause this is touching me in my heart of hearts...some of us try and some actually succeed. The waiting is not yet over for me...but I am holding on to Faith!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
    p.s Can I email this to a friend? You know it's done already!
    Spread the word...truth been said:jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I second that emotion!

    go head brother man
    tell it like it needs to be told
    a man who finds a good woman has indeed found a good thing !
    two snaps and a booty smack
    :toast:
    Natasha
     
  6. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love fam! sometimes, and most desirably, all times, a brutha needs to empathize and feel a sister's plight. thank God for good women (or good ribs!!!) that come along side a man and make him A MAN!!!

    keep scribin' yawl!!
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Somebody's mama done a good job
     
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