Black Poetry : I Loved Him

[eternal]

I don't know how I should feel
Everything seemed so real
But now the only thing I am sure of
Is that he was the man I love
But I cannot continue to give
To one who is not sensitive
To the fact that I have human tendencies
Like not being as perfect as I'd like to be
Now I could sit and wonder if i am pleasing
And wonder if my demeanor is teasing
But why waste the time wondering if I am giving all
But in true love he may never fall
I cannot change who I am without slacking
Because I don't know which aspects are lacking
And so I find myself alone again.
Wondering if I am sad...

 

[HODEE]

Very Nice Eternal... thanks for sharing. I read that some place before.. can't recall where. If you can let us know.

 

[MzBlkAngel]

thanks for sharing this with us.....

 

[$$RICH$$]

nice piece eternal.....but due to our forum rules without
the author's permission & name to this piece it must be
removed it's not allowed...... we as poet's know that if
work is displayed without permission it's lable as stealing
surely u did address it's not yours but i have to ask you to remove it ....Thank you
$R CL/Mod.

 

[eternal]

I changed the whole poem, last time I wasw here just to let all know.. The former was a poem I reseived via email from a friend who was just brightening my day. The poem above is original.
Thanks for enjoying it anyway!