Black Poetry : I Love You.............

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  1. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOU KNOW WHAT I REALIZED
    YOU DON'T LOVE ME
    YOU LOVE ME LOVIN YOU
    BUT THE REST IS FANTASY
    AND FROM WHAT YOU SAID LAST NIGHT
    A LITTLE PITY?
    BUT IT AIN'T WHAT I WANT OR NEED
    I CAN'T SPEND MY LIFE WAITIN ON YOU
    TO FULFILL 10 YR OLD DESIRES
    ALL BECAUSE YOU LACKED THE SELF-LOVE
    TO FUEL YOUR OWN FIRES
    TO DO THINGS WHEN THEY SHOULDA BEEN DONE
    BUT THAT AIN'T WHY YOU CONTINUE TO RUN
    LOVE FOR ME JUST AIN'T SOMETHING YOU POSSESS
    BUT YOU GOT MAD LUST WHEN I UNDRESS
    YOU WANT MY BODY BUT NOT MY HEART AND SOUL
    THEY DON'T SEPARATE MERELY PARTS OF A WHOLE
    OF THE BEING THAT IS ME
    AND IF YOU KNEW ME BY NOW
    YOU'D KNOW WHEN I GIVE I GIVE ALL THREE
    I WON'T SAY THIS WAS A MISTAKE
    BUT AGAINST MYSELF I CAN'T DO MORE WRONG
    I CAN'T SPEND ANOTHER MINUTE
    LISTENIN TO YOUR SAME OLD SONG
    THE THINGS YOU SAY YOU'VE SAID BEFORE
    BUT IN BETWEEN THIS TIME AND LAST TIME
    YOU GAVE ANOTHER MORE
    I KNOW YOU CARE FOR ME BUT NOT LIKE I NEED
    NOT LIKE YOU SHOULD HAVE BEFORE
    YOU FERTLIZED MY SEED
    BUT A NEW DAY IS DAWNING
    AND AS THE SUN DRIES THE TEARS FROM MY EYES
    IT HURTS WAY DOWN DEEP BUT STILL I RISE
    TO APPRECIATE WHAT YOU DO GIVE ME
    NO BITTERNESS OR REGRETS AND
    NOTHING TO FORGIVE CUZ SEE
    WE COULDA BEEN MORE OR NOTHING AT ALL
    THERE WILL ALWAYS BE LOVERS
    BUT THE TREASURE IS IN HAVING A TRUE FRIEND TO CALL
    I LOVE YOU!


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  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet Flow!!

    I dig!!;)
     
  3. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RASHAD..............

    THANKS FOR THE READ, AGAIN. I'M CHECKIN YOU TO! PEACE.
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know this poem is one of the “realest” things I have seen in a long time and as I read it and can relate to the other side and I was thinking to myself that if he was to tell you what you already know it would not be accepted or appreciated, at least by most people, but the beauty comes when you realize for your self the difference between what is available and what is needed. And you still have love “no bitterness or regrets” NO BAGGAAGE
    SIMPLY WORNDERFUL POET
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To that, I send a hug, a lotta love, and a great seal of approval to how you just DROPPED that ****! You came off with the realest rendition of removing self from subpar situation and for that you are blessed beyond aspirations!!!!!!!!!! Holla.
     
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    "YOU LOVE ME LOVIN YOU "

    i love that line
    great poem seems so real
    is it a true story
     
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    Nice work girl. Lovin every line. I can totally relate and the emotions u write with/about are so true. I'm impressed. The flow is great, the poem original and the feel is real. Nice piece.
    *Emma*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyght scribe poet !!! dis tells da story fo sho...
     
  9. NINI69

    NINI69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'LL NEVER KNOW.............

    IF NO ONE IS THERE TO HEAR
    DOES A FALLING TREE MAKE NOISE IN THE FOREST
    WOULD THIS BECOME BITTERSWEET
    IF I ALONE HAD ENJOYED THIS
    THANKFULLY, I'LL NEVER KNOW
    BLESSINGS RECEIVED FROM THE LOVE IN HERE FO SHO'

    THANK YOU :

    SHAZ, BROTHERMAN, LONELYPOET, EUPHORIA AND LAST BUT NEVER LEAST $$RICH$$
     
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