Quiet Poetry Lounge : i love you

baller

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You

Everywhere I’ve been
I’ve thought of you
…Longed for you
Whether at a dusty dusk
Or in morning’s dew
It all reminds me
Of you

During season’s change
There were wondrous things
Though, I’ve never complained
None compared
To you

You
Who treats me with such kindness
And adoration
Who
Redefines what it is to be
In a relation(ship)
Who
Lives to be
The person for me
Providing everything I would ever need

YOU.

If such a thing
As the perfect mate
Exists
You
Would be the one
I would wish
To share my life
With

YOU

Not some fantasy dream
Or imaginary queen
But the REAL thing

YOU.
 
TotalView...there is nothing like heartfelt love...and sharing that with the object of your heart's affections.:) like a friend said, "it's some kind of wonderful, when it's as easy as breathing." THAT'S love, my friend.

John lucky...first and foremost, welcome to the playground. the UK, eh? 'sbeen too long since i was on that side of the pond. GOOD to have you on the page. GLAD you liked the poem. THANKS for reading...and responding...and all that.
 
TotalView...there is nothing like heartfelt love...and sharing that with the object of your heart's affections.:) like a friend said, "it's some kind of wonderful, when it's as easy as breathing." THAT'S love, my friend.

Seriously, my friend...I love this piece. The "YOU"(s) are so animated. The poet in me wants to respond to this but I will refrain.

(smile)
 

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