Black Poetry : I love you

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  1. torch

    torch Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ever I wonder what it could been like if me and you would gotten closer
    You touched me in ways no other woman could ever have
    Your sensual lips, your medium tone skin, you had me with your smile
    I cant believe we just stopped talking, wondering what we could have had

    I tried to tell myself it was a teenage crush, a phase that it couldnt of been love
    "You slept around too much I cant love a ho" Was what I drilled in head
    But whenever we talked about our future you always put me in there as your husband
    I knew we were in love but I rather thought of you as dead

    I still wonder if you love me like you said you did
    All them long walks and poems we read to each other about us
    If you ever wonder what it could of been had we stayed in contact with each other
    My stubborness and ignorance made me not trust you

    I know now that I have always loved you and you will be always have a place in my heart
    Wondering will you ever contact me
    Maybe thats my heart speaking and not my mind
    But I know I love you and I always will have a special place in my heart baby
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the values of love is priceless and never can see things til it's gone
    wondering what could have been and what is , how we move forward
    beyond the wonderment of that love we felt or feel

    well felt scribe.......
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True love never completely dies. Blessed are we who recognize true love and accept all that gift has to offer. Posed right on point.
     
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    Trust me its better to have that love gone away to at the least hold that memory in your heart, and I know how hard it is trying to save face when you made a mistake. But hold on to that if she's where you belong life will bring her back around to you.
     
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    torch Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everyone for the kind words
     
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