Black Poetry : I love you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MissHoney, Jun 19, 2006.

  1. MissHoney

    MissHoney Active Member MEMBER

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    • I can’t express in words, what I feel for you
    • I’m wondering if this if a feeling every girl goes through
    • Many mates I have had, every shape every size
    • But you are the one; I truly want to be mine
    • Relationships in the past, I took as a game
    • You’re the one, who has made my whole life sane
    • I need you more then air, I can’t do without
    • I’m like a slave in a daze, when your in my sight
    • Even though you’re a dime, I don’t want you cause your fine
    • Because it’s like you gave me the vision, to see what’s inside
    • I care for you deeply, reasons to be known
    • You’re the last piece of the puzzle, that makes me whole
    • There’s no fear in my heart, I wanna express how I feel
    • I want you forever, responding to your every will
    • Cause here’s the thing, when I look into your eyes
    • My tears form my cry, cause your so worth while
    • It’s like God placed an angel, instead of a being
    • So when I look into your eyes, I’m amazed by what I’m seeing
    • To be with you is like, a dream of the extreme
    • I want you in my life forever as my king
    • The way I feel for you is oh so true
    • This is just my way of saying, I love you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was too kind and dearing and the love in reverse
    lovely drop
     
  3. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MissHoney:
    This is a really sweet piece. I really enjoyed the read. Nice work.
    Much Luv
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    enjoyed this piece of yours poet flo on.
     
  5. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very sweet piece
     
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