Black Poetry : i love you...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i think it was
    i don't remember when
    the sound of
    I LOVE YOU
    danced on the wind

    and if'n when
    it comes again
    a time when i
    can't remember when
    the last time i said
    I LOVE YOU

    no...

    I don’t remember
    The last time I said it
    so, I guess it’s too long
    Between then and now

    but I love you.

    That may not cover
    All the heartache I’ve caused
    Or the sleep you’ve lost

    And even though it came from my heart
    It may not even start
    To pick up the pieces of your heart
    Torn apart
    By things I’ve said…done

    And even though I’ve come to you
    On bended knees
    It may not be enough
    To ease the uneasiness I’ve brought into your life

    Still,

    I love you

    That may not end the hurt
    …erase the miles of dirt
    I've swept across the doorway
    Of your heart
    But I hope it’s a start
    In recapturing
    What I’ve discovered
    Is precious to me

    I hope that you can see

    How sincere I am
    When I say

    I love you.
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    nice flow...

    pd
     
  3. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well said Poet. Thank you for sharing this expression of what is precious to you

    BE
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    B....


    this is oh-so sweet!

    you've inspired me... be lookin' for it. :)

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
  5. honeebrownsuga

    honeebrownsuga Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank u. This nearly brought tears :crying: to my eyes. I'll be lookin' :look: 4 u. :peace:
     
  6. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PEEPS...thanks for the words...

    just a reminder for the fellaz, you gotta let her know...if not, she'll find someone who will.

    One.
     
  7. sexe1

    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is very touching and heart felt
    Keep it coming.:eek:
     
  8. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful love...

    baller...
    but, u knew this...

    bask~
     
  9. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sexe1...

    thanks for sex'n me...oh, reading me.:) and the love.

    MsD...there's always a smile when i see your name:)...so glad you liked it.

    One.
     
  10. VirtuousDove

    VirtuousDove Active Member MEMBER

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    I can definetely relate to the times when outiside distractions, distractions that are not of love, have caused me to neglect and mistreat the one I love. Once I realize what has happened, it seems as if saying I love you isn't enough because love shouldn't neglect or mistreat. Then I realize only God's love is perfect love and I can't let mistakes stop me, I just have to learn from them and press on and be conscious of the mistakes I made so that I don't make them again. I feel your pain!!

    VirtuousDove
     
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