Black Poetry : I Love You

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  1. Awriter'ssoul

    Awriter'ssoul Member MEMBER

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    I love you.
    No, I do not put on blinders
    And hide from faults to claim your perfection,
    For with this no man owns.
    With truth I see not with eyes of deception,
    But what you are is what I hold.
    Mouths that do not know you,
    Speak to me as if they do
    Your soul I talk to so to this I pay no attention.
    Yes we have are contentions,
    We spit words we should have swallowed,
    But rather it be today or tomorrow
    were making the correction.
    I love you,
    Let language not exist,
    Still never will you wonder
    My condition of this.
    Days of life I find happiness to breathe,
    but happiness is made shame,
    you my love, it can’t compare to your name.
    Your eyes set a blaze that cannot be tamed,
    Your kiss is fire,
    You the epitome of desire.
    I love you,
    Feel it in my kiss,
    transcend this world,
    we’ve entered eternal bliss.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the compassion and depth of thy soul
    say it's true love that set a blaze
    this was str8 up tyte poet say the words !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You could utter I love you, yet the words can't capture all you hold inside. This was quite a touching flow poet, wonderfully written.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Madly tight write, poet!
     
  5. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love is like...

    <appears>

    an abyss, U never know how deep it is until U fall into it.
    And this my friend is the expression of a deep love.

    Excellent piece, loved the flow and the expression!

    keep the words moving

    peace&1luv

    <disappears>
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love has opened the poets pen and allowed this expresson to flow and the poets love begin to grow and grow. Nice.
     
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