Black Poetry : I love you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ShortyLove21, Dec 11, 2003.

  1. ShortyLove21

    ShortyLove21 Active Member MEMBER

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    After all we've been through you are still here with me
    At one point I never thought we could be
    But you have shown me something I have never seen
    Although to others you are devilishly mean
    You mean so much to me
    With you I do not have to lie about the real me
    We have a bond that can not be broken
    With you I feel like a kid at chucky cheeses when you get you first token
    I get so emotional with the thought of you
    What I am trying to say is that I love you
     
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    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that is the sweetest i know how you feel keep writing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so wonderful when u open ya heart
    express da true love within u
    nice
     
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    very nice write...
    sweet emotional flow from heart:angel1:
     
  5. Alpha Male

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    Re: TO ShortyLove21


    Great poem of your love relationship
    Hold on real tight and beware it can slip
    If do not meet his needs
    You may hear of him some where else
    planting his Royal African seed
     
  6. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooooh how sweeeet!!!! i like this one!!!!
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
  7. GeneticSoul

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    sweet

    blessin to read that u expressed that need... love is a need

    keep it up and ya head too
    Gen~ETHIC SOUL
     
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