Black Poetry : I love you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SayWord, Oct 10, 2003.

  1. SayWord

    SayWord Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your eyes are like the sunshine bringing dawn to my reality

    You have me thinking my world is make believe

    Because my dreams are fruition to me

    I am totally captivated

    Totally motivated

    I feel so appreciated

    By everything you do and say

    You've become the sun of my day

    I don't ever want you to leave

    I'm asking you to stay

    I've never ever felt this way

    I've prayed for someone like you

    Now that you're here

    I can't believe you are true

    It’s amazing how you lay down your life

    In hopes that we can be one

    I’ve tried every way to hold back my heart

    But I give up

    You’ve truly won

    Thinking back to days not long ago

    You were simply someone I knew

    Now it’s my thoughts that won’t let go

    Holding each precious memory so tight

    I’m afraid they might blow away

    Trying not to get ahead of myself

    Trying to stay anchored in today

    I never knew love could feel this way

    Or be this way

    Let me say this one more time

    Don't ever leave, please stay
    I want to use the wind to write you love poems

    I want us to cuddle and watch Love Jones

    I want for one day

    My home to be our home

    Peace be with you wherever you may go

    Comfort for your mind

    A sweet smile to greet you

    To remind you that things are fine

    A blanket of tranquility to soften your weary heart

    Don’t allow ANYTHING to tear your joy apart



    (This was a colaboration with a friend of mine....Soft_Hearted)
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very smooth flow i enjoyed it
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really enjoyed the read
     
  4. angelicsage

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    woooooooooooooow.....

    I felt as if I were floating as I read this...
    the newness of falling in love
    being lost in the endless chamber of...
    mmmmm, this was soooo good,
    I've felt this kind of love before...
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so so beautiful...much love to you
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so into this! It flows in such a lovely and hypnotic way, like you could be swept along.
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so true love really does exist?
    loved the flow
     
  8. JAD68

    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved this piece....

    keep the flow coming
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is very nice...
     
  10. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow... lovin the collabo!
     
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