Quiet Poetry Lounge : I LOVE YOU...you love --her

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I walked with excitement
    to get to
    the place where we
    kissed
    and made sweet love
    many times before
    underneath the
    shelter of an old
    Sycamore tree

    but when I arrived
    in that space
    next to our
    shaded love tree

    I found your
    name and hers
    etched in
    wood
    and encircled
    by a heart

    and... I felt ...




    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    N2

    all i have to say is...

    the power in the abscence of words

    i sense a feeling of complete emptiness

    pd
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PD

    Emptiness ~ is a crazy feeling, isn't it!

    Thank you for the read!
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The symbolism in this piece is universal and I know that I have been there and done that.
    Thank you
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    N2urSoul ... this is tyte tyte black mini skirt tyte!

    luv it gurl!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL@ Destee

    Thank you mami ~~
    Glad you enjoyed the read ...


    Oneluv.
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaz

    You're definitely right about that -- this is univerSOUL, and many people should be able to identify with this piece in some way, shape, or fashion!


    Thanks for reading.

    Oneluv.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GURL U MAKE ME FEEL

    SO >>>>>>>
    I KNOW THE EMPTY FEELINS
    AND ALL THE BLANKS
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this speaks

    volumes to my soul, Poet! You captured it to perfection! You wax so eloquently...the shades of loving are manifold, intricate, deep...

    URntense, my sista!

    a
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Covered by your $$RICH$$ness

    Thank you my brotha for reading this piece...

    Thanx for the comps!

    One:heart:
     
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