Black Poetry : i love you unconditionally

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  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love you unconditionally
    you are my father
    yet my mother was never enough for you
    you had to have your cake
    and eat it too
    still we loved you
    unconditionally
    when my mother first became sick with cancer
    my husband and i gave her a gold nugget
    on a gold chain
    created from the first gift my husband ever gave me
    a herringbone chain that became knotted and tangled
    we melted it into a gold nugget
    and gave it to my mother
    for luck
    she wore it every day, on a beautiful gold chain
    the nugget of our love for her
    to help fight against the cancer
    she smiled and said
    i need all of the luck that i can get
    finally the cancer won
    i love you unconditionally
    you are my father
    yet my mother was never enough for you
    and when i came by to visit
    how do you think it made me feel
    to see the necklace that we gave my mother
    around the neck of your white woman?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaa!!
    feelin all the emotions inside here
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow i like this feelin da emotions here...wow
     
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    whoa.....
     
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    Dang....that was so sad........I feel your hurt sistah......I really do....Whoa...a lot of emotions indeed...

    Much Love fo ya,
    Foxy......
     
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    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is deep i like the flow now this is what i call expressing yourself
     
  7. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for feeling me.
     
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    is this true??? awwwww man i feel u on this one, did he really do that???:maddd: :maddd: :maddd:
     
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    WOW!
    WOW!
    WOW!

    Is all I can say!
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    [email protected]..that stung right there...
    sometimes you build your parents to be
    more then they actually are...
    this was supa tyte red...
    peace
    khasm
     
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