Black Poetry : I LOVE YOU (Such a simple title)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll wake tomorrow
    and tell you
    "Happy I love you day"
    because today
    is not what it seems
    I blame my own
    inquisitive
    "need to know nature"
    because of this
    but i love you no less

    I'll wake all forthcoming
    tomorrows 'til the
    sun is eulogized the stars
    retreat to their birthplace
    and the wind is enveloped
    into it's lungs ...

    saying I LOVE YOU

    see I figure love is
    beyond chocolate trinkets
    of adoration and $300 dinners
    on a "specific" day
    see we...
    do that anyway

    saying I LOVE YOU
    is what you do
    what you say
    how you touch me
    on the face and the
    soul

    is deeper than the february 14th
    checked box in the macy's calendar

    see...I figure our time is endless
    beyond the physical rooted in the
    essential

    personal messages transmitted
    on levels subliminal
    and how I do
    dream about you
    so...

    I'll wake tomorrow
    even if this is my last day God
    grants me
    to tell you

    I LOVE YOU.

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice .... nice .... nice.

    N2
     
  3. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    blak got songwriting skillz

    big tyme :)

    lovin' the love

    pd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yeah! verb

    very well laid to canvas bru....:)
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Verb.


    ...& i loves ya back!

    now deal wit dat! :D

    you are sorta like... a poet among Poets
    BLak Man! (yeah. dats a compliment!! LOL)

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please keep telling the truth anyHOWWWW!!!!!!

    saying I LOVE YOU
    is what you do
    what you say
    how you touch me
    on the face and the
    soul

    is deeper than the february 14th
    checked box in the macy's calendar

    see...I figure our time is endless
    beyond the physical rooted in the
    essential...



    thank you

    a
     
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