Black Poetry : I Love You Do You

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  1. pztvnrg

    pztvnrg Active Member MEMBER

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    Hi Baby,
    I called because I am really feeling you today
    Just wanted to say I love you
    Before I can continue you interrupt
    asking why do you love me

    This interruption zaps my energy
    I don't know how to respond
    Again you ask why do you love me

    You wait patiently for a reply
    to your seemingly reasonable question
    I understand my failure to respond
    You did not ask the right question

    When I say just because
    I sense you are dissatisfied
    Before I go I ask you why do yyou love you
    I'm still waiting for a reply to my
    seemingly reasonable question
     
  2. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    question asked by so many but few really want the truth.
    i like this scribe and awaiting the next one to arrive.

    scribe on poetess...
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Makes ya' say.........

    mmmmmmmmmm- - Damnnnnnnnnnn! This is a trip, but it's true!
    I can relate.....not because the "reasonable question" thrown back at me would throw me off....but because of how I could see it throwin' someone for a loop or two...!

    Tight piece, and thought provoking!!
     
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    Ive been asked this b4
    Sometimes words arent enough
    As simple as it is
    Sometimes you are so caught up
    In the mind set of love you have no idea
    Like this poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dat thing called love do this to ya sometime
     
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    this was a very tight flow flow on poet.
     
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    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SOMETIMES WHEN YOU LOVE SOME ONE SO MUCH YOU CAN' EXPRESS IT IN WORDS ONLY IN ACTIONS. GREAT POEM THANK YOU FOR SHARING
     
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    This was a nice poem... Write on.... Write on
     
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