Black Poetry : I Love You, Defined

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How can I say, I love you
    in a way that hasn't been said before,
    do I try to measure the weight of it
    to show that I love you more?
    Should I try to compare it
    to a delicate flower
    or use a metaphor for
    a summer rain shower?
    How can I say, I love you
    in a way that demands your attention,
    do I read you a list of your qualities
    that are much too lengthy to mention?
    Will I shout the words to the world
    so that no other sound can be heard,
    shall I sing you a melody of rhapsody
    that's as sweet as a tune from a love bird?
    I suppose then I'll say that I love you
    by scribing a poem such as this.
    It will have to do until I can see you
    and become lost in love's first kiss.


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and how can i say
    i do when our heart
    as two become one
    on existance shores
    and how my love
    rage deep to a core
    how can i say i love u
    when words can't express
    yet thy mouth ready
    to confess to defined
    the beauty of two souls
    inside the weave pot of gold
    how

    this was tyte as i take flyte
    listening to da words in sight
    flow head drop da beat as i
    dance my fancy feet..............
     
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    your words are sweet like honey flow on watzinaname
     
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    How do I say it
    as fancy feet dance
    through the golden fields
    of eternal romance
    How can I mouth the words
    when no words that I utter
    can describe this feeling I have
    that sends my heart a flutter
    No way I can say it
    No way I can show it
    All I can do, is attempt to flow it
    How?
    Thank you so much Rich, let those fancy feet dance...


    That was quite kind of you to say nevar, thank you poet.
     
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    for the love is instill
    yet how can i say it
    when my heart is in
    rapture to tame
    how can i let it be known
    when my tongue is tied
    and words won't flow
    tell me how can i let
    this deep feeling go
    how.............................

    most welcome dear
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When tongues are tied
    such that they can't speak
    And I feel sort of faint
    and my wobbly knees get weak
    How do I say that phrase
    when I'm all caught up like this
    I guess words just won't do, so
    let's just get lost in a rapture of bliss....

    Thank you again dearest...
     
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    ahh watch out now you two nice flow you got going
     
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    Ohh that was beautiful How shall one utter the words so they only mean truth and love are present. Its a wonderful thought that there are so many ways to say something so simple.
     
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    surely i seek these lines deep
    the the words i can not speak
    i try and try yet divine inside
    my soul lost on a joy ride
    i search the harvest of ya beings
    to say what my heart capture
    yet the pleasure of it remain
    holding me , how can i say it
    when my eyes talk
    and how do i express it with
    body walk i tryed and still
    i can't utter these words
    maybe my pen will do........
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you much for saying so, nevar.
    Yes, so many different ways of saying so, soulful2006, thank you poet.

    Rich,
    So hard for words to capture
    the true feelings of a heart
    trying so hard to find just the right
    phrases, where does one start?
    They say that the pen is mighter
    than the sword
    I've felt each sweet note,
    and every sultry chord
    But no one can blame me
    for needing to hear that voice
    utter those tender melodies, another step
    into this journey would be anyone's choice
    How could I not want to continue
    into this trek of love....
    How?
     
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