Black Poetry : "I Love You" (a Tan-ka joint)

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  1. Desa'rae

    Desa'rae Member MEMBER

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    "I love You"
    (a Tan-ka joint)


    Decidedly So
    voluntarily I give
    what is me to you
    forevermore, I love thee
    until the passage of time


    desi2001-copywritten
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    "I Love u"
    so greatfully
    as i offer my all
    upon u i will always
    and together we be
    foreverness in stillo

    I really love how u pose this piece here....wow!
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true depth in few words...real artistry here..


    one.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    short and sweet.
    delicate touch.

    nfinite
    j.
     
  5. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love dem Tankas

    And yours is so well written...I kept reading it over and over again. Gurl is love...committment felt and believed.

    Welcome...Joyce
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOVEly personified.

    nice queen

    blak
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome sista, I am enjoying your flows. Your well is deep.
    Thank you

    a
     
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    Sister Desa'rae, your words are so eloquently stated.

    blackfox
     
  9. Desa'rae

    Desa'rae Member MEMBER

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    Fellow Poets, thank you for the read.

    peace~
     
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